ekhm.
soo..
im used to unfinished fics, but still, ya should countinue.
i hope this review makes u work, but its not likely.

...this is amazing

*lee making bloodline*
THink to crystal _badassness-
a wild naruto appers

Holy crap. You my good sir are amazing. Each chapter is crazy long, and written wonderfully as well. I would wish you good luck, but how it is now, it didn't need it.

Katsu means Detonate.

Fuck you! ICHIRAKU'S IS THE BEST! ( But I'll still read the story )

It's gay for a boy or man to call another man -kun, unless an older man or boy with more experience does it to a younger man or boy with less expierience.

I can't find them

what about 2009? DUDE! IT IS 2015!

one word your threat was a little bit on writing man you got my :-)

water-blade has no stories what happened?

Nice

I've gotta say, I'm upset with your choice. I really enjoyed this story and I had been looking forward to reading more of it. By any chance would you pick up where you left off? I haven't read the other person's adopted version but I will after this. I like your writing style, it was fun to read. Btw I say ignore the bad mouthed reviews you got. I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

Did the scrolls include at least one dildo bat?

This is terrible,i like the first chapter but i think you over powered naruto too much and his age should be something like 15y above for the kind of power you gave him and the story is really corny and i think kishimoto was stupid for stating that naruto could end pain cause there would always be people who dosen't like how it is going,so for him to be trying to change konoha,he is really stupid and very childish and if you ask me,the second chapter is rubbish and sorry for me bashing u like this,i'm really sorry.