| Reviews for Waterfall |
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   Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 2 . 1/11/2015 Brilliant job on this two-shot! I totally love it. |
| Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 1 . 1/11/2015 Interesting start to the story. I look forward to reading more soon. |
| DixieAnnabelle chapter 2 . 1/6/2015 Beautiful! |
| 4MeJasper chapter 2 . 8/17/2014 They took off together! |
| happyghost chapter 2 . 2/3/2014 This was very good, and well written :) I enjoyed it! |
| mickkila chapter 2 . 11/18/2013 Is this the end of this story I do hope not |
| Deborah Stone- KarmabalanceDeb chapter 2 . 6/27/2013 Wow. That is beautiful! |
| starnosy chapter 2 . 9/4/2012 AMAZING! Just amazing. The whole story is so touching and well written. I was a nervous wreck until the end. I have hoped so badly for a HEA and it was. It is such a sweet story. I love it. It is now one of my fav's. |
| GeezerWench chapter 2 . 6/25/2012 Oh! How romantic! How sexy (without sex), how compelling, sorrowful, touching... Practically perfect just the way it is. Good job! |
| I-am-Switzerland00 chapter 2 . 6/6/2011 Waterfall and two other short stories on this site are my absolute favorites. Thank you for the entertainment... Outstanding writing! |
| I-am-Switzerland00 chapter 1 . 6/6/2011 You wrote Jasper’s anguish in such a believable way that my own heart broke for him. Then by the end of the chapter you have the reader sighing with Jasper’s “Don’t marry him. Don’t change” line. Wonderful writing |
| DarknekoKurai chapter 2 . 5/18/2011 I love this! Great job! |
| LittleRin26 chapter 2 . 3/18/2011 This would make an awesome full length. |
| wendy1969 chapter 2 . 1/6/2011 wow, that is different it is nice though, it was a little heartbreaking too for some involved. |
| Sandra Marques chapter 2 . 11/12/2010 They are so beautiful... I love Jasper and Bella couple (just to be more honest with you, I love Jasper, he is my favorite character). And I liked to see then in your story. I just miss his words; I mean, the kiss was great, but I wished he told about his feelings for Bella. Anyway, wonderful job. Kisses, Sandra |
