im crying reading this on a bus and people are staring at me

it was okay. theres nothing bad about it.

No, you're not a bad writer! This fic was really tugging on my heartstrings, especially the part near the end where Zack cries with Aerith. It was very well-written, very touching, and very beautiful.

Keep writing!

It's actually pretty well for a short fic. I sincerely liked it.. You should do one from Zack's point of view?

Hi,

This is so sweet and tugs at my heart strings. After finishing Crisis Core, it makes this so much more. Good job.

Any chance of a continuation or a sequal?

wow...soo beautiful, since Zack died i has always ask my self about Aerith feelings, and some how you answer me LOL, i love the way you express Aerith feelings, and also Zack's, great!

This was so heart warming. I almost cried at the end. I loved Zack so much.

oh... my... gosh... saph! I cried reading this! Literally! my brother asked if I was okay! Good job!

Man, no one gives you reviews! You're actually really good at writing. I like how you made it so that Aerith was really showing her feelings, and I think you did a great job of everything. I'd really like to see more from you. _

P.S. I Love your stories

~Keychain001

Aw, I feel very sorry for them. This was both cute and sad, nice job!