Reviews for Now I Lay Me
zoespeer chapter 1 . 6/6/2015
Love the inner thoughts as part of the story! It was a really good cute story. Well written
OrphndAcct chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
This is different. The verse and the plot is quite different from the Destiel stories here. It's a refreshing thing to read. It just swallows you whole.
Sayuri-Yuuko chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Aww This is just too cute!
Naire chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
It's a very interesting idea but I think you've made Dean sound like a five-year-old with mental problems. That doesn't mean I didn't like the story, it's just that you could have make it more believable if Dean's thoughts were n't jumbled and... well, so crazy.
But I've got to give you this: you have true talent in writing.
absababs chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
AWWWHHHH. This was so sweet!
loverofgaydragons chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
i Favorited it but to be honest i'm not in a Cas happy mood. i just saw season six where he does the shitty thing and starts working with fucking Crowley so his promises mean nothing to me.
smokeyadrenaline chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
I really really like the Dean's thought vs Dean's appearance technique. I got teary at the end. It's a really touching fic. Thank you. :)
Chapa'ai-hi chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
This I the first supernatural fic I've ever read :) And I just have to say that it was so good! I love that we can read snippets of deans thoughts. And the switch of viewpoint was awesome too :) loved it :)
KatZenSPN chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
I enjoyed this story so thoroughly. I feel like you really captured the nuance of that scene and took it to a logical conclusion. You really understood Dean's fear of abandonment and being alone, and Cas' difficulty in comprehending that. So good. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Mint Pizza Queen chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Aww, so cute!
Mdk chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Awww...this have to one of the sweetest, angsty SPN fics ever! Loved it! :-)
ehblehbored chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
this is really good.

I dont know how to express how much I liked it, but it was amazing.
Pru.Clearwater chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Very good job building the tension. Also, the flow from thought to dialogue was good. I sometimes wish this site had star ratings.
SecretSnow chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
my own faith in a 'higher power' is tentative at best. to see Dean question his faith and build his faith only to have it broken again made me cry.
AvaRoom chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Congrats! Yours is the first Fanfic I read in english and I must say: Quite a good one. I'm sorry if this review may not be the best one - reading and writing are two different things in a language, but I ask you to keep on writing. (Especially this pairing, if you don't mind ;) )

I'm wondering how you can repeat yourself without sounding like repeating... You buildt quite a lot of tension, mostly at the beginning. Only the end came a little overrushed - they should have taken their time.

Thanks to you, I enjoyed reading!

Ava
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