Great job!

That was the best fanfic I have ever read. I hate you because it was awful. I love your story very very very very very very very much.

This was a truly amazing story. You did a really good job getting the characters right, and it was just great.

This was absolutely fabulous.

That was so touching! I think Henry was a little too harsh, but I wouldn't have it any other way because he was PERFECTLY in character! Good job!

That was simply amazing! I can imagine Shawn do that for Gus, and its always scary to see someone so friendly snap.

I like how you portrayed this!

Does Gus actually get shot in the series? (If so don't tell me which episode, I hate spoilers). Or instead, is this just you using Gus getting shot as an example?

Great examine of Shawn's character. I love that you did it from many different POVs. *favs*

This was really good. Quality stuff right here. :) I really enjoyed reading it - it was an interesting look into Shawns' psyche.

Thank you for writing this!

E! You've made me so happy! I LOVE this!

My favourite has to be pissed off Shawn under Jules' narration.

And! Hooray for Gus in a pink shirt! :D

Lovely ending, it was nice to see Shawn's emotions when gus first got shot. I loved when Gus tried to slap some sense into him and how Gus talks him down from quitting. This story was great! *favorited* and I'll look for more of your stuff!

Aw! Gus! The last little bit is too sweet to handle... but I still think I like the Henry chapter the most.

Sorry I'm reviewing this so much but I really really love it. Each chapter gets better and better. The Shawn/Henry relationship is really hard to convey and the way you had Shawn acting like a child was just perfect. This is definetly the best chapter so far. I love Henry's reaction, how he's angry but can't describe it. Really interesting and not what I'd expect a fanfic writer to come up with at all. Typically he'd come in and you know, hug him and comfort him and crap but this was so different and unique. Still great, love this story.

Oh man I just can't get enough of angsty Shawn. It's like meth, really, way too addicting ha. But seriously, you're writing is great, very few mistakes and very in character. Shawn would definetly react like this if Gus was in any sort of danger. So far I love the emotions you're pairing up with each person and it's really interesting for a story to be centered around shawn but not told from shawn's point of view at all. This is my favorite so far, sensitive lassie is pretty cute and I love that you had Shawn admit the fact that he's not a psychic to him when he's so vulnerable.

Really interesting story idea... this is a great chapter and it's not hard to imagine at all. I love to think that Shawn cares enough about Gus to lose it in this sort of situation.

That was so amazing. Perfect writing and true to character. I loved it. Chapter four and five made me tear up.