Reviews for Banished Soul
Someone chapter 21 . 7/1
I really hope you get around to start working on this story is quite a new take on these kinds of stories and a very refreshing change of pace.
I really enjoyed it,and I can say you left this at a very important part of this you complete this.
AJ Granger chapter 21 . 5/27
What a cliffhanger. Regulus deciding to switch sides for Harry. I hope that you publish more with this story.
AJ Granger chapter 8 . 5/26
I hope that between Lily and Petunia someone else lets Harry talk. It'd be nice if his life isn't over just because the Harry of this world went bad and got killed.
Azure Shine chapter 18 . 1/14
ugh, why u not just send powerful harry or harry who already kill voldie. harry who know voldie have horcrux?
Azure Shine chapter 17 . 1/14
Noooo! remus died?! and regulus is really bad. death eater? not like canon? and there have horcrux too?
Azure Shine chapter 14 . 1/14
ugh.. so difficult, so troublesome. poor harry
KiaraWangWilliams chapter 21 . 7/8/2018
I love this story and you are/were doing a fantaastic job on it, especially since it's new way how Harry comes to the universe he is in now and how James and Lily automatically treat him as their son right away... I hope one day, you will continue and finish this story. 8D
nadyr chapter 1 . 11/14/2017
Not to exile, the word desterrar is more better said as uprooting.
The Sixth Day of Division chapter 5 . 7/11/2017
You know, I don't even like Snape, yet I still find Sirius to be an absolute ass in this chapter. I feel Snape's pain.
Slytherinrules39 chapter 21 . 2/20/2017
Hello! I was wondering if you could finish the story, it was really good!
Robert77833 chapter 21 . 11/14/2015
Just read all the new chapters to this story after years today. I know it's already been another half year since you updated it but I hope you get round to finishing it, especially since it's nearly done.
TMarvoloRiddle1944 chapter 21 . 10/4/2015
I really hope you do decide to update this story soon!
I really really enjoyed it!
Guest chapter 21 . 9/29/2015
I'd love to read what else you may have thought up for where the story goes from here
shookenuppepsi chapter 6 . 8/8/2015
I really wanted to get into this story because alternate dimension stories where the marauders are still alive are my absolute fave. I think you have a solid idea behind your plot. The thought that it isn't Harry himself that is somehow in another world, but rather his soul going into an empty, Kissed vessel is a new take on this trope. But your story NEEDS a beta in order to be readable. I really tried to ignore it, but I just couldn't get past your continual grammatical errors regarding "your/you're" as well as a lack of apostrophes. Plus you misspelled McGonagall's name wrong *every* time. With all the errors, I could not get through them in order to enjoy your story the way it should be. I think you have a solid plot idea though as well as a motivation to write and write a lot, which a lot of "authors" don't have. If you find yourself a beta or maybe take a fine tooth comb and go back and edit this story, then I think it can be a gem.
ralula chapter 21 . 5/26/2015
Different take on a very different point of view. Keep writing your story is entertaining and spellbinding. Thank you for your efforts...
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