*sniff sniff* poor doumeki.

T_T

that was so...sad...

i think i was the one who broke there...

it could have been longer though...but i think its shortness had a magic of its own..

anyway..that was pretty good..really good...

thats how i imagined douneki would be if ever watanuki died ( and i have this horrible feeling that he will die sooner or later-_-)

aw.. so sad :( i felt like crying but since my stomach was hurting, there was more pain to my stomach than my heart, so no crying this time xD poor Doumeki :\

That was sad, and very much what I think would happen if Watanuki died (a real possibility, considering who the creators of this story are. :P)

Brilliantly done.

Incredibly sad.

I am currently trying not to cry while typing this.

I don't think this needs any editing.

It's really very well done.

Thanks for posting, Ronnie.

You killed Watanuki? Jesus Christ woman, you're coldhearted.

Ah well, I like the angst. :P Wish it was a bit longer, and more tearjerking. You could've added in how he died? How Doumeki felt when he was unable to help? How he felt immediately afterwards? That sort of stuff.

that was wonderful... sad and disturbing but wonderufl. thank you for writing it. I think I need to go hug my cat now.

Afrieal

A two tissue box story for all it's shortness thank yo for sharing I'm gonna go hug Af's other furline I think she's got the right idea.

Rysh (usually we do one kind of ditzy review but both of us wanted to thank you for sharing)

the last part cause my heart to ache a bit..'(..so sad..

I seriously teared up. This was so sad, and so pretty. Wonderful.