Reviews for The Untold Want |
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woodhouselazybones chapter 1 . 12/26/2016 wow,this work is so bittersweet!Why don't you continue to finish it?And may I have your permission to translate it into Chinese to share with my friends?Thanks a lot! |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/8/2016 Its a crime to leave such an awesome story incomplete :/ |
miss chapter 11 . 12/4/2015 please continue,this story so long time no see |
Carling chapter 11 . 1/21/2015 This was incredible. I'm sad that 12 years later it's still not finished and left off at a very interesting place. I assume you've moved on in life and I hope you're well and happy. Thank you for writing and sharing this much. I hope someday you come back and finish this. |
occasionallywrite chapter 11 . 10/14/2014 Such a fascinating story! |
Guest chapter 11 . 4/9/2014 When will the next chapters be posted? It is really good so far, I'd like to know what happends between Harry and Draco |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/9/2014 Nice use of the polyjuice potion. The story is great so far : ) |
ORgasmicPigeon chapter 11 . 3/14/2013 Oh, bless him, Draco is so psychotic ally cute bless him.. :) |
DM-Luvah-S chapter 11 . 10/1/2012 this is one of the best drarry-stories. you are my most valued author in fanfiction. |
El' Caliente chapter 11 . 4/30/2011 plz update soon! |
aryllia chapter 7 . 4/14/2011 "'I wanted someone to belong to. Someone who would need me, who would be mine and I would be /his/. My father, my mother, I used to think that Cho... perhaps... If only Sirius could be around more.' 'Wh-What?' he stammered, feeling his eyes bulge out of his face. 'Hermione I don't believe you've said that! He's a /*guy*/ in Merlin's name, and an arrogant, selfish, evil Slytherin jerk at that!'" Notice the emphasises I did there? I wonder if Harry noticed *snicker* "Ron, still lost in dream land, was trying to butter his cornflakes." ... "'I don't want brandy for my cornflakes.'" That image will haunt me all day now. I will never be a serious student like this D: "Dumbledore was rolling on the floor laughing" I really damn WISH this had happened in the books. A little exaggerated but wth, the image is worth gold. ROFLing is good for the health, as long as the floors are clean. |
aryllia chapter 5 . 4/14/2011 "'Your first kiss? Potter, I never knew!' Ron seemed quite pleased with himself now and without giving Harry the chance to reply he leapt on him again." I had to bite my scarf to stop myself from cackling in public. At the end, not even that helped. Oh Draky, you're getting rusty - that couldn't hae been any MORE tracable XD' (points to Harry for being coherrent enough to remember any other obviously odd details about "Ron" after that snog) |
aryllia chapter 2 . 4/14/2011 YOU might not like this chapter, but I love Draco's reaction in the end :D And oh, Dumbly's sweet tooth! That old man sure is himself - he's... I don't know how to express it in English but it litteraly translates to "calm as a lobber" when anyone else would be tearing at the hems. Enough to stroke your ego? It better be, I don't have time to write any more - chapter 3 is waiting for me! |
Chaz chapter 11 . 6/27/2010 omg i love this fanfic! it's different than others. why haven't u been trying to update this? this a good fanfic. people deserve to see more of this one. please update soon. |
storylover1234 chapter 11 . 2/13/2010 Please continue, I really look forward to the next chapter and the ones beyond that. Luv ya! ~always storylover1234~ |