Wow It's crazy and horrific! It makes you wonder... but what if?!

This fic isnt cannon and watari wouldn't ever do anything like that to L. Read wammys house a manga special made by ohba and obata the creators of death note. L has always been rather unemotional and rather obsessed with justice. He beat up other orphans in the orphanage as a little kid because he thought they were going to beat him up when they wanted to hug him and watari asked what happened, L claimed it was in the name of justice. If anything watari is a father figure to L.

Nice

Holy shit.

This is Perfect.

Well done, that's a fascinating idea, simply, yet well executed.

AMAZING! You are very talented :3

That was cool.

...So let me get thus straight: L was an emotion filled child full of pain and Watari wanted to help him. Okay. So, Watari messes with his brain to make him emotionless, and according to another review, L gets the black eye from the incision.

...Yeeeah, not sleeping tonight. checks clock 4:02AM ...Um...

Keep it up! 8DDDDD

Oh my, I just started laughing. Your Watari is so perfectly twisted.

Disturbing, but possible.
Still, it gives you a feeling of dread, doesn't it... And Watari was an inventor, and founded an orphanage the conditioned young children into geniuses... I can see this happening, and it's kind of scary.
You're an amazing writer!

This is disturbing, yet creepily makes sense. This makes me completely rethink the series.

Well done, it takes a lot to freak me out.

This was really well written, keep up the good work.

... this is easily the creepiest thing i've ever read. this is taking into account every gory and traumatizing story i've read.. it's so scary because it's so plausible. a and b committed suicide... watari was an inventor. perhaps he's want to make a better l? now then, i'm putting it on my favorites and going off to read fluffy l/watari stories.

Is it still done today?

O.O

Wow...you managed to make me hate Watari...not easy to do.