*despairs*

That... was brilliant! It's rare you see stories about problems like dementia written so well, I especially liked the way you put it into stages...(blabs on a further 10 minutes about how great the story was- favorites story and leaves).

That was so sad, but so very well thought-out and the premise was very good. It must be especially painful to watch someone whose mind is their defining asset decline like that.

I liked how clear the role reversal was. Luke started out as a child and by the end he was taking complete care of Layton. Guessing from the information, Luke can't have been that old by the end, maybe 21?

Although it seemed a little odd at the end when I realized that Flora pretty much never showed up in the story, I liked it this way because it made it all about Luke and Layton and their relationship.

Oh, and I liked the gradual progression. The little stories that made each (thematically named) stage come to life. I did not feel like the story was rushed or that any of the pieces were out of order.

Very well done!

Pepipanda

brilliant story (: so sad

Whaaaaaaaa! This is soooo sad! Poor Luke! Poor professor!

poor luke

(Just to make it clear; I liked this)

This is.. Sad. I didn't really enjoy reading it (because it isn't like a Professor Layton-story, it's more like another story with just the characters) but I really felt like I couldn't stop. I needed to know how it turned out in the end, even though you kinda felt it all the time.

And, my god, I am crying. You have made me cry..! I never cry when I read a book/fanfic... Never...

o.o *faves*

Good fic.

Holy damn was that depressing. The poor thing..

Awesomely written though, so great big hairy thumbs up for that!

Dang, this story makes me cry. T_T It's smartly written... And it's beautiful in its special way. Poor Luke...