I always felt like they at least needed to hug after that 'rescue' and they could have done it after Gwen walked away, since Jack asked him if he was okay anyway and patted him on the chest.

oh... perfect. i love it.

Just decided to read through all your fics... This was good too, if slightly OOC (not that I mind a little bit of OOC-ness).

Off to read the rest of your stuff...!

So cute! I love how worried Jack was about Ianto.

Jack really should tell Ianto he loves him.

Keep up the great work!

It was a nice addition to that moment. I always thought they should have done more stuff like that in the series.

Very nice and fluffy, just as Janto should be.

I did like it, alot.

Judy

Loved it :)

woohoo! first reviewer! score :) I personally loved it Jack and Ianto are such a cute couple, aww squee! The only bit i was concerned about is when you flipped point of views, some of the words matched third person, and some matched first person, be careful! For example, "Jack was running so fast that he didn’t even hear Rhys yell after me," Otherwise it made me feel all fluffy inside :)