I like how you built up Ed's tension/confusion - lovely fic.

aww... flufftasticness is impossibly adorable. it's just too CUTE!

UGH. So precious. I love the simplicity of this story. Your topics were all darling.

I love this story and how you bring it all together!

amazing. i can only go 'aw'

Well, it's not difficult to imagine why this won first place. Great one-shot.

Now wonder this won 1st Place!

little pieces of what could be their future in the manga, done incredibly.

Reading something bearable for FMA that includes this two has been so hard to find, this just restored my hopes. There are just so many badly written things in this site that makes the worth reading impossible to track.

awe, that was really sweet, and I really enjoyed reading it _

Very cute, and I loved the way you wrote the different sections, all separate and yet together... okay I'm probably not making sense. Basically I liked it. Awesome job. Keep writing.

FFG- Jo

Really, really good. Thank you!

I absolutely love this one... So poetic and, well, warm-feeling. The characterization is dead-one and all the little details, like Pinako swapping Ed's hand away, are what makes this story so charming.

Wonderful read!

this is so good...it gave me a nice, warm, tingly feeling feeling. that's always nice! _

I like seeing another side of Ed. Winry really is the only one who can do that to him. :)