Reviews for Canon
Guest chapter 24 . 2/14
What a great story! I’m very glad that I came across it, and have spent a good part of the day reading it, even while I was supposed to be working. I just couldn’t stop until I finished. Your writing is excellent!
Sir NickolasJhonstonMarcus III chapter 24 . 1/1
if you are reading this trying to decide whether to read this story or not based on the reviews, trust me, take the plunge. it is amazing, well written, well edited, well planned, and well done. it's a trip through and through. you will have a hard time putting it down. you will laugh, and you might cry, but seriously. read it and enjoy.
sam4691 chapter 24 . 9/8/2019
such a sweet story. So well written. So True to the original canon.
Frox chapter 24 . 7/31/2019
I literally spent the WHOLE DAY reading this! Thanks for the great story. I didn't enjoy much about OCs before, but this one is AWESOME! Ethan is a charming boy, you know.
Rebadams7 chapter 24 . 10/7/2018
Love This long into the future
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sue1zide chapter 24 . 8/21/2018
Interesting.
sue1zide chapter 17 . 8/21/2018
I think Jeremy is somehow involved with Jake's disappearance.
sue1zide chapter 13 . 8/19/2018
Jeremy?
Debbie Hicks chapter 24 . 4/15/2018
25. Epilouge two
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MusetteBlanchard chapter 24 . 6/7/2017
You have NO idea what this story does to me. I spent the last two days immersed in Canon and Grace, living with them, breathing them
And let me confess: it is not my first time reading Canon: by now it is actually the third time (is it really a charm?) and I an easily see a fourth time in the horizon.
I am in absolute awe. Your prose, the way you constructed your characters, both canon and non-canon ... is nothing short of amazing. The scenarios, the lines, Ethan's teenage angsty antics mixed with the suspense and the mystery, the action and the love *shakes head* everything in it draws me in, like a moth to a flame.
You are an amazing writer and I do feel awfully sorry if you don't feel like being in here anymore. *sniffs*
I don't know how RL is treating you but if you have mercy on us ... please please finish Grace. I beg you to grant us this final wish *dramatic Muse* it really touched my heart. I do wish with all my might that finally FINALLY Aubree and Seth can be together together.

I bow to you, you're a fantastic writer.
Please, tell me you would reconsider it?
Thank you.
jk chapter 1 . 5/3/2017
Who the fuck are all these nobodies? Ethan, jules, ava...no one fucking cares!
Sweetie7smiled chapter 24 . 3/30/2017
Neat story! Thanks for writing!
Sweetie7smiled chapter 9 . 3/29/2017
Very interesting! It's kind of fascinating to see how any odd reasonably intelligent human might have managed to figure out their secret, and try to deal with it. Thanks for writing!
Sweetie7smiled chapter 8 . 3/29/2017
Neat story! You know, to begin with I wasn't real keen on a story not more focused on Edward and Bella; but you have done well with your original characters. Nice job! I made it this far, and now it's growing on me. Thanks for writing!
jacky chapter 24 . 11/8/2016
Thank you verry verry much for this wonderfull story! I loved to read it!
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