Wow, this is awesome! I love your use of words, and I love Zack's character. He's so amusing right now. And poor Cloud has to learn all the stuff about the materia so quickly. But hey, are you ever going to update this again? It's really good!;_;

Cool... Are you going to finish this, or what? Really, get to work writing this, it's really good.

im too lazy to sign in so. wow! this is intresting! i like the way you write and the whole thing is just uhh creative! WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE! _

*rere*

Continue! This is a very original story, I haven't crossed anything like it...I love it! I've also gone to your site. _ It's simple mahvelous! :)

Wow! Your vocabulary is so rich, I found myself reading each thoughtful sentence a few times. Very nice.

CLOUD! SUPER UKE!

I reallyreally love this story and I hope you get more out soon.

A new chapter! Yay! And a good one again!

Yes, Zack, ignore logic... . I really like this story, very much... the chapters are just too short... #;)

Miyaa, poor Cloud. Being all cramped up like that, an only Zack could remain all cheery and unpredictable. -

What da heck are those STRIPYYYY ONESSSS?

Cool...keep it up...one of the more weirder stories I've come across, but very well written... _ Write more!

Eeee, I love this universe. _ Hee hee, black and greeeeeen I know who those aaaare. _