Don't leave it there! I know its been years since this was posted, but I suppose I'm hoping you'll get my review and remember part 2 which is maybe sitting half-finished in your documents? You're a good writer, and this sincerely made me cry. I would love to see the conclusion, if you have the time )

Nice a really like it. So that means you better update... or else. :)

That was EXTREMELY bold-of him to say, "Are you trying to convince me, or yourself?"

Wow. Very nice turn of phrase.

(Chuckles w/ odd expression on face) Yes, I won't lie-that was DANGEROUSLY close to tendershipping. Have you ever considered writing it? I think you'd be pretty good... right?

(Eyes widen) Please don't tell 'Kura I said that-he'd think I was calling him gay. Eek.

You can't leave it like that D: so what happened!

AH! cliff hanger! please please please please finish quickly! i've actually been watching this one since it came out, i just now got an account '

Hi. I'm putting this on story alert for when you upload the second part. I like the story a little.

So far as I can tell you've done a good job of capturiing Bakura's essence.

This fic is going really well! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it. Please continue! I love how 's words are in bold, it makes it really easy to follow who's talking!

This is great update soon. I want to see what happens next

That was somethign else. It wasn't your typical Bakura beats up Ryou kinda fic. Heaven knows there are enough monotone hackneye fics like that in this fandom. I could really feel the atmosphere and "see" what was going on. You use very descriptive language but it is not overdone, something most people cannot do. I am very curious to see where this is going. I have an idea of course, but I can never quite be sure with your fics. Until then

See ya~

That was an interesting look into those two's relationship! Hmm...why would Bakura want Ryou to fight back? The way you wrote this is a little chilling, and I loved every word! I can't wait to see part 2! See you later!

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That was really, really cool. The whole way through. You have both their charecters down perfectaly, and it is obvious that you put a ton of thought and effort into this. I'm very anxcious to see where you're taking this.

Great job!

wow... just wow. That was like amazing, like more than amazing... like flipping awesome! Your writing is so good! the descriptions ans dialog are written like a professional! Great job please continue!

Well, you've left me speechless and that's rather hard to do. All I can say or sure is that I can't wait to read the rest of it.(*smiles*)