| Reviews for Show Me Emotion |
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   GintsukiKyu chapter 9 . 6/18/2011 Nice fic, I'll when Vaughn comes back he will find Chelsea pregnant or gave birth to his child. Anyway I'll be waiting for next chapter. |
| Naty17 chapter 9 . 3/4/2011 Ooh! Me. Want. More! OK, that, for some reason, reminded me of the Cookie Monster, from Sesame Street. That must be a really perverted cookie monster... |
| Naty17 chapter 1 . 3/4/2011 It's good, but the timing isn't right... And you probably have no idea what that means, do you? Well... Just stop saying would. So, instead of "She would walk to the door.", like you say it, say something more like "She walked to the door." See? Big difference. P-S: I'm not trying to criticise you, I'm giving you advise. It doesn't matter if you use it or not. |
| Ayara012 chapter 9 . 1/22/2011 aaaacccckkkkkkk! omg, wats gonna happen write write write WRITE! i want to know wats gonna happen! i mean, "the last time she would see vaughn...in a long time" is a HUGE cliff-hanger, omg WRITE FASTER! PLEASE! |
| Fritillaria Vajra chapter 9 . 12/30/2010 Can't wait for see the next chapter, hope happy ending! |
| musical-ink-exchange chapter 9 . 8/17/2010 loving this story so far! update soon! I can't wait! 3 :D |
| Fritillaria Vajra chapter 8 . 7/4/2010 what a awesomeeeeeeeeeeee fic! i love this story! pleaseeeee continue it! i'll be waiting XD |
| engie115 chapter 8 . 5/25/2010 Aww so cute! I hope they get a kid!I know the feeling with the taks testing long boring hours if you finished early...so glad I'm done with all that. Hope you enjoy the texas heat more than I do and I hope to read more of your story I absolutely love it! «engie» |
| Saw is sad chapter 8 . 5/25/2010 thanks 4 the update :) loved it |
| ShadyMango123 chapter 8 . 5/25/2010 ooohhhh vaughn wants a child? heh, cute~ |
| Saw is sad chapter 7 . 4/2/2010 that chapter was amazing and a lot of other good comments thanks 4 the update |
| Leemix chapter 6 . 4/2/2010 how could you make elliot evil! |
| Akira Shouji chapter 6 . 3/9/2010 What Elliot did was evil and terrible but vaughn is so sweet! Anyway, it was a very nice update soon! |
| ShadyMango123 chapter 6 . 3/9/2010 what elliot did was ugh, that evil little %$#&! but what vaughn did was so sweet! he cares for her so much~ love the chapter by the way |
| Little Witchy One chapter 4 . 12/2/2009 That was a very goode story. you should continue or make a sequel or something |
