Reviews for Boys and a Girl That Surrounds Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() LOVING IT! Please make more chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm scared does Shane do anything weird with Alex and its good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Coolness. :) Alex reminds me of myself... except, i have TWO friends that are girls and the rest are boys. :) Please continue... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved It |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE JELENA:] Hm...maybe you could make it less rushing..take time to explaing things and stuff. I don't know. But I am liking it so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! UPDATE SOON PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() umm I think its .ok. you have a good idea going on i just think its a little...unrealistic I mean I know it is a story but remember they are people and would your friends really talk like that and do you really think like that I mean come on I dont mean to be negative or mean or anything I just wanna tell you the truth XD please dont be offended if you work at this story it will be better XD just keep working on it XD ~KT~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's great but can I make one suggestion... stop having the characters say LOLS when they laugh. It annoyed me throughout this whole fanfic. But other than that, it's great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() soo awsome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really really like it! it is soo cool the way they treat alex..hahha its kinda like me...i dun really hang out with girls as much as boys..they r way more str8 forward...but still sometimes girls talk is just necessary so u cant do without girl friends haha. OMG! I cant w8 till the next chapter when they will find out who they live with! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What the heck? I can't believe you actually god a good review. All the text is pushed together, your grammar is horrible, the summary alone made me go "What?" Seriously. I don't get it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I LOVE IT! i was waiting 4 ages 4 dis chapter 2 come out!finally! THANX! i cant w8 2 read more! pls update real fast thanx |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story!pls update asap |
![]() ![]() ![]() soo awsome! |