Lol I kinda hope Sorami isn’t the thief... it just is so typical ya know. Like the person you least expect and have trusted is the thief! For a while I thought it was hinata cuz of the silver eye thingy but I doesn’t really make sense for her to be the thief considering her characters hasn’t even been introduced lolll. If it is hinata then that’s a story that’s not typical and is completely original and amazing! I’m just praying it’s not Sorami cuz the. I feel like I’ve ruined the story before I even began ya know? Great story and have a good day!
-ilyz (my nickname not “I love you”)

No such thing as NaruHina OverDose! I REQUIRE MORE!

I usually review at the end, yet I have to say that I cannot stop laughing. This and the first chapter were brilliantly composed. I must keep reading! Brilliant for your first composition.

Really great story, wish there was more.

Lol what?

I know this has nothing to do with the story but I couldn't help notice you made a reference to the video game Corpse Party. Otherwise great chapter :D

i fricking cried. beautiful and oh so freaking heartbreaking

i love the charlie the unicorn reference. shun the nonbeliever! rofl

I thought there was going to be a sequel?

I loved the story over all and really hope you are planning to continue the series however I was extrememly dissappointed by the ending. Kakashis a douche!

great!

When's the sequel?

well...i had a good day today lili. i mean slept in till 4 pm and got arby's...arbies?...arbys without the ' ?...hmmm i dont know that one...buuuuut i digress. good day. im on chapter 8 and i got to say, im suspecting sorami chan like kakashi. i think its her. i guess i will have to keep reading wont i? very very fun story so far, i look forward to reading and reviewing more Cherish my comment...CHERISH IT! lol

Cool story

starting out good