I think you've done really well to capture the dream like quality in words but by the way could you just tell me what book/chapter/page this takes place on?

What happened? Where did she go?

Didn't understand the ending. But the rest was great :)

Bye!

wat the hell

y did she leave him

Wonderful start.

When I got to the end, I wasn't sure if I wanted to cry or laugh. Poor Ron!

I love it! :)

So sweet

First of all- kudos to the deviant art reference. I have that picture saved on my computer, actually, along with some of the other ones by that particular person. :)

This was so sad, but in a fulfilling way. I'm assuming that this takes place while Ron gets poisoned, hence the 'Er-my-knee' at the end.

Really, though. The enormity of the ending just makes me want to pat my favorite ginger kid on the head in a comforting way. I just love how this transcends from very sweet to melancholy in a mere matter of words, to the point where I simply can't get over it!

Oh well, maybe I'll find peace if I add it to my Favorites list :)