Reviews for Move |
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NeVErFAdeiNG chapter 4 . 8/16/2011 I love the way you write. Please update soon. |
Tala Medori chapter 4 . 6/18/2011 this fic is soo cool. you really pulled off Gaara's personality. can't wait for the next chapter! |
eriophorum chapter 4 . 6/10/2011 i loe your style of writing, wish i could write like that, interesting story, update soon please? |
Witchdoctr chapter 4 . 5/8/2011 please tell me you're still working on this. It's pure genius. |
Boyfriend Tees and Honey Bees chapter 4 . 4/15/2011 I love this! I hope you update soon! |
NamelessProphecy chapter 4 . 2/24/2011 :) Keep up the good work! |
NamelessProphecy chapter 3 . 2/24/2011 LOLOLOL I love this chapter! Seriously, this story is freaking awesome. Your writing style is AMAZING! please write more! |
milk bones chapter 2 . 1/22/2011 I'm a new reader, so I don't know about the earlier plots. But I love this! I think it's interesting, and I love the modern spin you gave it. Gaara has never been one of my favorite characters, but I enjoyed reading this story anyway. I love the bits of humor you add here and there. This is really good so far, and I can't wait to read more. In the mean time, I'm going to catch up with the other chapters :) |
secretsofgray chapter 4 . 12/30/2010 woah. I really like how you go into each character's psyche. It's really well-written (better than most AU hs fic out there) Please, for the love of all that is Indigo, UPDATE! |
I.am.Ashby chapter 1 . 1/18/2010 and by 10% you know i mean one-hundred percent D my mistake. |
I.am.Ashby chapter 4 . 1/18/2010 Gosh i love your writing. you need to update more, for real. Usually i dislike longwinded writers because they drag on about the same thing for ever, but you have the most unique writing style on fanfiction. You give everything just the right amount of detail; not too much and not too less. And your plots are a breath of fresh air as well. They're easy to follow, but not so much that you can predict the outcome and lose interest. You have your readers eating out of the palm of your hand. And one more compliment before i skip off to read s'more of your stories is the characters! oh lord, the characters! I read Naruto highschool fics like it's nobody's business, and they are ALL the same. But your portrayals of Kishimoto's characters could not be more spot-on. I wish you all of the luck in the world, my dear. Keep on writing :D you've got my support 10% :) |
cookiesluv chapter 3 . 3/18/2009 very well written long.. but I don't mind at all for once, Gaara is not OOC and you've portrayed his thoughts very well agree with .Ashby, this story is better than a lot of school based modern naruto fanfic and ppl should take time to read this rather than some really lame fics covered in dialogues. and it's even greater knowing that u take the time and effort to make it better. hope you continue this soon Great job! |
I.am.Ashby chapter 3 . 3/15/2009 Wow. this is a really great story. Better than any modern Naruto fanfic i've ever seen. I don't know /why/ nobody's reviewed it yet; it's really great. Keep up the good work! |