I'll give it a 3/4. It was very nice.

well...*blink blink*ummmm waw uhhhhhh...LOL!OMG XDXDXDXDXDXDXD3

was preety random

Lol XD XD

Even though it was a really, really short fic, I enjoyed it! .

Lol, especially the surprising bits like the bike one XD XD

And the ending was very in character XD

aw geez yuki is so mean w/o basis hahah

what the heellll thats not dark its just mean

you fast forward wheres the 1st kiss geez

hehehhe well i dont think brat fits yuki you know hes taller wenks

heheeh shuichi is cool

youre prologue is so short well i felt it was needed

I luv this chapter!

“I beheaded my sister’s dolls. I was ten at that time. I beheaded. All of them. I beheaded them. Now, you were saying you loved me, can you still say this even though I’m a doll killer?”

And that line did it, I laughed like nut cracker who was about to explode out of too much laughter! *still laughing* hahaha!

Ahahaha! I can't even imagine Yuki and Shuichi switching place! Ahahaha! Completely adorable! Funny too! and cute! But I seriously prefer adorable to describe your story! XD! :3~

Hey don't let that get you down Yuki. That's who you are, and Shuichi loves you anyways. was interesting to read. I was giggle the whole way through

I guess...Yuki couldn't even dream Shuichi doing something bad like murder...ooh...That makes me want to make Shuichi do that.../ though i don't think i'd be able to keep them in character...

quick question. With this...Is shuichi older than Yuki? and...Is bad luck already formed or is is growing, similar question with Yuki, just is he new novel writer?

Thanks. I think this story...though i wish wach chapter wasn't so short