great job! man, cranky folks! thank god for mickey D's!

haha so great. she even managed to cut a little over an hour of their trip. way cool. but hey, it's ziva, why am I surprised. )

OMG... thats the funniest ive ever read.. HAHAH... oh dear! Now i have to go fix my makeup for work... i should know better than to read you before work LMAO

I will draw you two sheep..and buy you a rose for a marvelous bit of Tiva goodness inspired by the episode that had zero, zilch, nada , none of it! It was a good epi, nonetheless.

Keep your muse happy!

tehe very cute! well done

Nice!

LMAO! I was so wondering how that car ride back would be xD You did an awesome job with this!

"I'm adopted?" hahahaha...best line ever! You rock Sheep!

x

-Kait

As always a great story:)

This was great, really funny and the perfect pick me up at 9 in the morning. What movie were Tony and Ziva talking about?

Great characterizations.

Great give and take between our favorite team.

hehe

Funny as heck too!

Really liked it!

They should have shown us this at the end of the show!

(And I bet Gibbs made the trip back in about an hour in that big ol' muscle car!)

“Yeah, and it would take emergency services that much longer to find us so they could extract our mangled bodies from the wreckage, so thanks, but no thanks.”

Loved it! Great work!

Ahaha, this was very funny. Shame that it couldn't have been in the episode. Great work.

Awesome! I can really see that happening, which makes it great )

Loved Abby's reaction - "I'm adopted?"

And Tony and Ziva breaking into song - brilliant!