Omg I love this story sooo much! I wish you can include more tho, like Kartik's reaction to what Gemma has just told him, ... Just more juicy deets really, you're a phenomenal writer.

Don't worry it was good enough for me. I just don't think that Gemma would consider even thinking the word pussy.

aww... more!

Its been four years, your fans need you to write another chapter, its been really enjoyable to read so far.

Ok I am not even finished with this story yet and im enjoying it so much! most times i wait till im finished to bother reviewing when I come in a story before its already completed.. I only read this series once and absolutely hated the ending. But im seriously enjoying this so far hope you update it often!

Omg, this is such a good story! Why won't you update, please update soon!

oh no! You stopped updating! Now I'll never know what happens! Please update soon! :'(

Oh my god! This has been the best chapter yet! I was guessing she was pregnant, but I wasn't really sure. But now I am!

this is a great story. cliffhangers are not nice. please update soon :)

Soooooo very good. Never stop writing this, please! I await the next chapter with baited breath (Cliffhangers are NOT nice!)

~RF

Ummm... I'm kind of addicted to this story x] That's really all I can say for now xDDD Soo...yup.

Love and Rockets,

Re

this is so amazing! when will you finish?

please continue with the story it is a really good one

I love this fanfic, one of the best written ones on the web for sure. Few inconsistencies with characters being in one position and then some how being flipped around (mostly happening during the sex scenes) as well I'm not liking how Gemma is treating Ann or Fee but each writer to his/her own. As well you mix our time era with the books at times, small mistakes but still there. Err, there was one other thing... don't remember, but keep up the good writing and please post the next chapter soon! Awesome work!

More! Please :)