"So your dad is the man who runs the general store. Jackson," Shannon said. Gibbs stared at her for a moment. "Yeah," Gibbs replied. He wasn't exactly a good conversationalist, especially when sitting right near a very pretty girl. He was quite proud of himself for the small talk they'd had while at the station." - AW!

"My dad's a mechanic in the next town over. Mum's a teacher" - Those were the exact same jobs my godparents on my mom's side of the family had!

"He was in the Navy still," - Gibbs was in the Marine Corps, not ever in the Navy.

I love this addition to the final scene :) Shannon and Gibbs are so great together. When he's thinking about her is the only times he seems truly happy :)

oh, so sweet and so sad! I loved it!

uh ehm it's stillwater. stillwater, pennsylvania. but ok otherwise

haha bet that had you worried-who's your man? haha it's ME your not stalker (who eles)

SQE! i LOVE it but where's the tiva? I'm dying here. Oh well I'll just have to keep reading till i fond some decent tiva

(stupid fan-girl moments)

overandout

Very good, enjoyed it a lot!

wow, it was my fav episode too! loved it... can u please tell me who the singer is of the song Lost...

thanks

Aw, that was a cute Gibbs/Shannon story. I loved it!

This was nice...I like your writing style and I liked your story. Please write some more...

oh that was really sweet! and I'm glad Gibbs can laugh about some of the memories instead of being really sad. But I thought the towns name was stillwater?

But maybe Hollis can? Great story!

I love this! So cute!

Aww..

xoxElle