Hope you’re well! I really enjoy this I hope you’ll update soon and continue this!

Still no clue what's going on. 'Bye.

I would like to see an update.

It has been a long time ago since you updated. People still read and love your story, so please update :)

Interesting story.

Now that you have reached this point in your story, things really start to get interesting. Before, I was of two minds if I should continue reading at times. While I would at no time have described your story as long-winded, it only now gets the focus it lacked a bit before. It's a bit like watching Pulp Fiction. You get lots of threads and until you reach the second half of the movie, when they finally are woven together and make sense, you keep asking yourself where the story leads you to. I think adding Lily into the picture WAS your focus.
So now, I can say: Yep, excellent story. I particularly liked you zombicorns. Creepy and quite unique. That also refers to your explanations how the 'cursed' unicorns came to be and why they reanimated only now. I wonder how you'll develop the character of Draco further, after he was rescued a) by a squib of all people and b) by someone he was at odds/angry with before. If you consider that the magical world doesn't really care much about their non-magical offspring ... Stigmatized, outcast, you name it. How does he deal with the life debt he might owe her?
The addition of Lumina's nemesis into the equation was a good move, though you should incorporate him some more, thus making Lumina's surroundings a bit more aware of her previous occupation or at least of the necessary talents she had to display (like at the entry scene in the tomb). And I am not talking about her a bit pointless gun waving within the school building. Her dragon scale coat or some quick and effective martial arts movements (ever heard of Wing Tsun? Capoeira?) might do the trick. If you had her disarm a wizard and effectively defeat him in front of ... say, Draco or Hermione, this could drive home the little fact that most wizards and witches are helpless once you remove their means to channel their magic (aka their wand). (Bellatrix would be an exception though. MacNair probably as well. How about others?)
The "I see no difference" incident and the active role Lumina took by dishing out punishments EQUALLY to those involved, then rounding on Severus was brilliant. It might help Hermione's bruised ego some as well.
What did Lumina do during the years before her mother sacrificed herself? How did she acquire knowledge and develop her personality from child to grown-up? How did she learn to raid tombs? What happened to her father and is he still alive?
Hopefully see you soon,
Moi

Snicker, this is a great story. I love the idea that lily is back and gunning for those who intend harm to her baby.
Please post more chapters as I want to read more of what happens.

Hey!

I really love this story and hope that you'll update soon :)

I wonder what Severus would think if he knew what has happened to Lumina. And by the way, this fic was the one that made me want to read Harry Potter fanfiction. So please update quickly.

LOVE IT! write more please:)

I just found your story adn began reading it... I loved it! I hope you will update again sooN!

I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!

You know, I was just rereading this fic and remembered how much I love it.

Not that I should talk or anything, but you should update this soon. I really wanna know what you have in store for those two, and I want more Vlad action. He just has so much bad guy potential...

Actually, his description reminds me of Rufus from FF Advent Children. Or Pegasus from Yu-Gi-Oh... -.-'

Anyway, I hope you're doing well, and I eagerly await more Lumi-kick-ass gun scenes and sexual tension (One-sided, of course) between her and Vlad.

Oh, and how can I forget? More of that Severus-eat me-Snape and Lumi tension as well...god, I feel so put out now. All the other Snape fic's are either poorly developed, completed, or on hiatus FOREVER.

Don't be that guy, Ms. 24.

No one wants to be that guy.

You know?

The guy that never updates...not for 3 years, and then waits another 3 years before falling off the face of the earth?

(Like me...)

;)

c'mon, write more! Rarely people make a story this original.

Love, love, love this story ! The plot is different, but interesting and Lumina is such a believable character. Please update soon :)