Reviews for Of Secrets and Admittance
TheEliteLabRatsLover chapter 1 . 4/2
I love this.
loveagoodstory101 chapter 1 . 8/29/2017
Very sweet
Guest chapter 1 . 5/6/2016
Hm. Not bad, as far as stories and plots go, but your grammar could use improvement
KomokiEmrys chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
Ha cute.
HELEN EMRYS chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
I Would love to be in one your Merlin and Arthur Stories where I am Merlin's Sister Helen and I am Married to Cenred. Please make my wish and my request come true please?. Love From HELEN .
HELEN chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
All of your work is amazing and very enjoyable as well. I definatly Love reading and reviewing all your work especially the Merlin and Arthur stories you write and have written.

Please would you do me the honour of putting me in one of your stories please?. My Charactor would be called Helen. I would Love to be Merlin's Sister Helen or Merlin's Wife Helen. I am definatly not spaming you at all. I am asking nicely and with a kind heart. Please think about what I have asked you?. From .
MERLINS SISTER chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
Arthur definatly cares very deeply for My Brother Merlin and that makes me very happy indeed.
HELEN chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome.

Merlin and Arthur definatly belong with eachother for ever and ever.

All your work is Awesome Amazing and First Class.

I have A favour to ask of you which I hope you do not mind me asking.

Please Will You Write A Story about Me as Merlin's sister who is named Helen who is named after Me. In the story our Mother Hunith Arranges A Marriage between Helen and King Cenred.

Helen and King Cenred get to know eachother and find out that they have more in common then they thought which leads to a very happy Marriage for Helen and Cenred.

I am asking you in a nice way and I am not spamming because I do not spam at all.

I hope you will think about what I have asked and I hope you will wite the story?. If you do decide to write the story I would most definatly Read and Review the story. I would also help you with the story by giving you ideas in A Review.

Your A very Brillant Author and your A very Brillant Writer. I love Reading and Reviewing all of your Amazing Work Because Your an Amazing Person who writes lots of Amazing Stories. Love From . PS Helen would be named after me because my name is Helen.
merlinslover chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
I hope this review will make you happy as all your work is ace.
Kat Nightfox chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
I know this story and it's predecessor were written a long time ago but I just found them and I really enjoyed them both, very much.

However I was a tad surprised no one ever pointed out to you that Merlin's eyes are not brown, they are quite a striking and obvious (at least on my tv and computer)deep, dark blue. Rather like the Atlantic ocean or high quality sapphires. That said, I enjoyed the stories!

Never like to nit pick but sometimes I just can't help myself! If you are mad, you may feel free to pelt me with cookies!
HELEN chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
DEAR DEMENTEDVIPER MY NAME IS HELEN AND I WOULD LOVE TO BE IN A MERLIN AND ARTHUR STORY AS MERLIN'S SISTER HELEN WHO PRETENDS TO BE ARTHUR'S GIRLFRIEND IN ORDER TO PROTECT MY BROTHER MERLIN WHO IS HAVING A RELATIONSHIP WITH WRITE A STORY WITH ME IN AS MERLIN'S SISTER HELEN?.I WILL DEFINATLY READ AND REVIEW THE STORY MOST DEFINATLY FROM .
HELEN chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
DEAR DEMENTEDVIPER IN YOUR STORY THERE WAS A SENTENCE THAT READ ARTHUR WAS A SENTENCE SHOULD HAVE READ ARTHUR WAS A BLURR.I DO HOPE THAT YOU DO NOT MIND ME POINTING THAT OUT?.APART FROM THAT THE REST OF THE STORY WAS BRILLANT WELL WRITTEN AND WELL THOUGHT FROM .
HELEN chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
IN YOUR STORY YOU WROTE A SENTENCE THAT READ ARTHUR WAS A SENTENCE SHOULD HAVE READ ARTHUR WAS A BLURR.I HOPE YOU DO NOT MIND ME POINTING THAT OUT?.I HOPE WHAT I HAVE SAID HELPS YOU?.LOVE FROM .
HELEN chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
I WILL DEFINATLY REVIEW THIS STORY TO MAKE YOU A FIRST CLASS AND BRILLANT STORY MOST DEFINATLY OUT OF TEN TO YOU FOR BOTH STORIES AS THEY ARE BOTH FIRST CLASS AND WISHES LOVE FROM .
helen chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
ARTHUR AND MERLIN MAKE A VERY LOVELY COUPLE.I LOVE THEM BOTH VERY VERY MUCH INDEED.I HOPE YOU ARE HAVING A HAPPY NEW HELEN.X.
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