good story so far

Zero outta all the things you think about, its your shirt you worried bout?w

THAT WAS BUETIMUS

B R U H! If you fucked his brains out, you would have humiliated you enemy! Damn Zero use your brain! Or the hot air in your skull!

Well that's creepy...

Nope! You lUV HIM! AYE SIR

please continue!

I was smiling throughout the entire chapter. Thank you for giving us such a long, and wonderfully-written chapter. My deep appreciation towards you.

The shower sex was DAYUM. All we needed after the previous chapter's 'activities'. ;'3 I loved how both Zero and Kaname were washing and rinsing each other. The innocent, endearing act turned quite sexy - not that I am complaining. x'D

"I don't know. When we do it again, we will find out." I adored that line! Zero's expression after saying that was hilarious! Although, Kaname's admission to Zero that it was his first time too was endearing as well, especially with Zero being so increduous with the fact! xD

Haha! Zero had no idea that they had sex on his shirt! LOL. I wonder what his reaction will be when he finds out! Poor hunter. ;'3

Omfg! They finally reached the second base on their relationship~ ;3 I have to say, aggressive Zero is a turn on. The idea of him ordering Kaname around, commanding him to strip and straddle him while he drank had me all hot and bothered. I had to read those parts three times to satisfy my imaginations! xD Kaname all blushy and flustered made it all better! *-*

As for the lemon, I absolutely and utterly adored it. You are really amazing in writing smut! x'D *praises you*

Grrrr, this chapter had me speechless. It was that amazing...and hot! The lemon had me begging for more, not enough yet. *greed af*

Aw, aw! Kaname asked Zero to be his lover T.T Our little pureblood is so damn adorable o; Hopefully, Zero will say yes, which I know he will. He cannot resist a blushing pureblodd, after all! x'3

Finally! I am glad that it did not take Kaname too long to realize his attraction for Zero. By the looks of it, he had been drawn to Zero for rather a while now! o.o

The fact that Kaname will attempt to look good and seek out Zero is so cute! xD Wanna read more~

Damn you for stopping when things were getting extremely good! x'D Although, I have to admit, that your citrus including frottage was truly delicious~

I wonder why Kaname did not protest against Zero? Does he like Zero even without knowing himself? Can't wait to find out. *-*

I wish the chapters were a bit longer, but still, I loved it!

Zero should stop denying his attractions toward Kaname. It's freaking obvious he wants him. As for Kaname, he needs to stop using his blood as an excuse to see Zero! Lawl~

I have been meaning to review this story for a while now, but procrastination got the best of me. T.T

I have to say that the idea of Zero getting off by picturing Kaname on his knees while biting and licking the blood off from pureblood is damn hot. I want moaar!

Gonna go read the next chapter now! ~ ouo

Nicely done!