Hmm... I really like your other Twilight/ first time stories, so please don't get me wrong, you are a brilliant author. But am I the only one who hates Edward in this one? In my opinion, Bella is WAY to submissive in this oneshot. She wants to ride a motorcycle, she's a grown up woman, so OF COURSE she CAN. Without having to apologize to her boyfriend about it. And Edward doesn't have any right whatsoever to patronize her like that let alone get angry and aggressive... If I'd been Bella, I'd have smacked him for trying to shut her up by kissing her like that. And as a first time, it was kind of abusive, wasn't it? Even if she 'liked' it... there's such a thing as consent. I'm not writing this to offend you or your story in any way but it gives me rhe chills to imagine young teenage girls reading this because it might give them the feeling that it's okay for a man to treat women like this.

Mmmmm...HOT INDEED! Edward surprises me more than I thought he'd be able to!

hot and sweet. Just the perfect combo :)

So sweet

:) loved this

aw so cute;D

Hello. Sounded like a good time to me! Thanks, Suzan Noerr

just the way it should have been!

Congrats!

awesome story. i hope u write more of this stuff.

:D you left me with my mouth hanging open...arrg there comes a mosquito...lets see if he treats me as well as Edward ... i wish a was in Bella's place...

I loooooveeee every word that you type :)

Kisses from sunny Spain

aaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww me encanta *.*

Truly, these two are absolutely made for each other, just like puzzle pieces fitting together!

nicely done!

Oooh... Angstward is hella sexy! :D

great one shot, see that should have been in BD...lol