| Reviews for Labour of Devotion |
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   AbK chapter 23 . 6/23/2019 Lovely read thank you abk |
| APL chapter 23 . 1/29/2018 Fun story |
| AvaNobleAKAToshibaa chapter 4 . 8/20/2017 I'm actually confused. Why would Alice be teaching a maid how to act like a lady? Give her pearls?teach her how to dance? And most importantly why is Bella so ungrateful? She was so scared of being bought and raped and now that someone decent has bought her, she's rude and resentful. |
| NidhiZala chapter 23 . 6/17/2017 This is an amazing story I love it. |
| marcheline99 chapter 23 . 8/29/2016 I enjoyed your story heaps, thank you. The characters were interesting & their hot & steamy times were great too. I'd have preferred that it was set in some in identified time/place because it was just so often wrong about nineteenth century Britain, so I had to just keep imagining it was a fictional context. It was a minor but frequent irritant, so if you're writing historical fiction it would be better to have a decent grasp on the basics like the fact that the was no slavery actually within Britain at that time like there was in the US. Otherwise, like I said nothing would have jarred if the time/place was just fictional. Nevertheless, an enjoyable read anyway. |
| faith chapter 15 . 8/5/2016 This fan fiction is good keep it up |
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 23 . 7/23/2016 YOU ENDED IT TOO SOON I WANT TO KNOW IF SHE HAD A SON OR A DAUGHTER BO I HOPE, BOYS SHOILD ALWAYS BE FIRST COURSE MINE WAS NOT I GOT A GIRL BUT EVERYONE WANTED A GIRL EXCEPT ME,I JUST THINK BOYS SHOULD BE FIRST TO PROCECT LITTLE SISTERS. THAN YOU FOR THIS WONDERFUL STORY |
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 22 . 7/23/2016 YES THANK YOU JESUS HE ASKED HER TO MARRY HIM GOD SHE SAID YES THANK YOU THANK YOU. NOW WHEN WILL THIS WEDDING BE SOON I HOPE. |
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 21 . 7/23/2016 YES HE LOVES HER YES HE TOLD HER YES THEY LOVE EACH OTHER THAT IS SO GREAT. |
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 20 . 7/23/2016 don't really kow why she needs a key she never leaves unless shes with someone is it even locked? |
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 19 . 7/23/2016 WELL AT LEAST HE KNOWS HOW SHE FEELS ABOUT HIM |
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 18 . 7/23/2016 GOOD LORD SHE FINALY TOLD HIM ARE THE ANGELS IN HEAVENSINGIN[SNICKER] |
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 17 . 7/23/2016 ok. |
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 16 . 7/23/2016 I'M GLAD SHES BACK HOME WITH EDWARD AND THINGS ARE GREAT WITH THEM. I GLAD ROSALIE IS GONE EMMETT WILL BE OK HE DESERVED BETTER THAN HER I HOPE HE FINDS IT TOO. |
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 15 . 7/23/2016 SHIT I JUS THOUGHT OF SOMETHING ROSALIE AND JACOB ARE PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER GET THEM TOGETHER SHE CAN RULE HIS HOSE AND LEAVE THE CULLENS ALONE. |
