Reviews for Five Kisses |
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Lizicia chapter 1 . 9/18/2012 Another one of your stories which I can't help but love. The progression of the kisses is very interesting, how it begins with a demonstration of their chemistry, a challenge, and ends with something akin to real feelings and, well, a real relationship. The second kiss is sweet, with a hint of sadness, third one shows the beginning of what happens with the final, fifth one, the hint of what they both are afraid of and, at the same time, desire from each other. I think it's particularly good that Robin initiates the fourth kiss; I always felt the way in which Barney took all the heat from their first encounter as Robin was the one who remained friends with Ted to be very unfair. At least in this story, the fact that they were both responsible and she took the initiative, makes it more real and sensible in my head. And he breaks the bro code for her. Loved it. |
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 11/25/2011 Awesome story! |
iLoveRomance2o11 chapter 1 . 3/30/2011 Nice work!(: |
Solo Ensemble chapter 1 . 8/12/2010 Looooovely. Bah, I can't stand it. |
BurningUpASun chapter 1 . 7/17/2010 this was amazing, I loved it! |
Katamabob chapter 1 . 5/4/2010 :) Ooh la la! I like it _ Sweet, steamy, contains Barney... WHat's not to like? Kate |
Viktorija chapter 1 . 11/29/2009 Great job!:) |
Obani chapter 1 . 11/24/2009 You make me happy.:) Now, if you will excuse me, I think there's something in my eye... |
Donteatacowman chapter 1 . 6/6/2009 Aaw. Great job. Thank you. |
montycrowley chapter 1 . 2/16/2009 Since I love this so much here's a review. :) I read this last night at such a late hour and it was just what I needed before I went to sleep. Dialogue is tricky whenever you're dealing with Robin and Barney but you did it perfectly. It was a fun read, thanks! |
mirai3k chapter 1 . 2/8/2009 this was DEFINITELY much needed after the last fic (and after the way HIMYM is breaking Barney as of late). *sigh* I wish we'd get to mutual Barney/Robin land in canon NOW, but you do a damned good job of giving us a dose of them together. Thank you! |
Winter Sapphire chapter 1 . 2/1/2009 GUH. I loved each and every bit of this. Amazing, amazing, amazing. ... Guh. -WS |
Lanter chapter 1 . 12/5/2008 I like how all of the encounters easily fit within the context of what we have seen happen on the show. This was very well written. |
Deep Fried Penguin chapter 1 . 12/4/2008 Ah yes, Barney and Robin do have a crazy amount of awesome chemistry together. |
Elling chapter 1 . 11/3/2008 I'm weird in that I'm extremely picky when it comes to fanfiction, and really only comment on a fic when I think it deserves it. And this one deserves a comment. -Very- well written. Descriptive writing without being overkill, and from my viewpoint, you kept Barney and Robin true to Barney and Robin, which is not always easy. Nice work. |