Omg! This was amazing

Damn good story

That. Was. Beautiful. I was in a constant state of arousal (haha), throughout the whole story and what you have written so far. I loved it. Love, love, love it! Jace and Alec together made me want to release as soon as they were kissing, but Magnus and Alec made me want to gnaw my eyes out at the sheer pleasure that your descriptions had transported into my body. It was wonderful. I could feel an extremely heightened pleasure just from reading, and that's what it's all about. Being in the story, feeling what the characters feel. And god, am I happy I felt what they were feeling. I'm still rather aroused, if I have to admit! :D (So odd to be telling you this, haha!)

Oh my GodOh my GodOh my GodOh my God!This is the BEST TMI fanfic I have every read!its soooooooooo gooooodddd. Why the hell don't you update it?! Do you want me to go to your house and make you write it for me? Because I will, if that is what it needs to be done. Please write more, please continue PLEASE

Brilliant

holly... you've made me love Magnus more than I already do. That was like... i could feel every touch, every kiss. It was the best story i have ever read in my life! You've inspired me very much! keep writing more please!

Noooo! Damn it, that was too HOT to end the chapter right there... Update soon if you can ;)

Oh. My. God. Shit, I like that this story isn't just romance and/or smut and I can actually imagining this happening in the actual book, excluding Submissive to Alec! Jace.

I'm just going to tell you a few things
1.) I find Jalec creepy and unatural
2.) I was glad when Alec didn't kiss him in COG
3.) I thought so so many times in this chapter to exit this story
4.) you are as talented and descriptive as cassendra clare herself
5.) I should have been discusted by this story. However I wound up thinking it's one of the best fanfic's I have ever read
6.) You made me read a story about a couple I in no way suport over and over
7.) well done

(cant be arsed to sign in .) you cant leave it like that! Its been 4 years since that last chapter! If alec had had to wait like that with magnus for that long it would count as torture XD please come back to this

Wow.. That was amazing, you've managed to capture the characters of malec so well, while still being able to pull them out of their usual characteral realms. Can't wait for the next chapter! Heard about you from bobbleheadjesus. I so glad I did! :)

-E

*Pouts* Is this finished? It can't be finished. Write some more! Please! Preferably, more Alec/Jace. Thankyou

Your writing is just phenomenal! You should totally write another story, preferably a Jace and Clary one (:

AMAZING

I hope this ends a AlecXJace cause I do love them together and I so wished they happened in the book. They are both my favourite character and it was such a disapointment to me when they went with other people :( I find it really hard to find a nice long decent AlecXJace story that might even still be on going like this one. (So if you do know of any then feel free to let me know:L I need one to read!).

Anyway! Loving the story and I hope to read more soon!