That was a good, good story!
I liked Ranger, Steph n the Mm, and Ella.
I love that her father bought, kept, and returned her but at and very happy she found Her music again.

WOWIE!
What an awesome story. So compelling and addictive. I loved the multi-layered plot and your characterisation so much. Stephanie and Ranger and her affect on him was great to see and loved the Merry Men's reaction. You incorporated so many hysterical laugh out loud moments that I had to leave the bedroom. Thank you for such an enjoyable, intriguing and detailed story woven so deftly with recognisable canon but added your own signature as well. Worth so many more reviews. 1000 reviews from me!

In one word...Amazing !

Gosh such a crazy convoluted story. Loved how different yet the same she was for the most part. Nice to see her bond with everyone and a slightly different ranger. Atleast more willing to admit his feelings and her too. Great story

This is brilliant! So we’ll written and a good creative multi-layerd story. I’m impressed and relly enjoyed reading every single word. Thank you!

Wow one of the best most riveting stories I have read. I'm only going to say that while the medical shit might be right on, nobody with a double fracture hops around! Even on pain med it is too fucking painful. Every hop jars everything and she would have been having to elevate and ice a LOT. I had a very bad injury and was nonweightbearing for weeks and just using two crutches hurts. I'm like Steph I hated the pain meds and really suffered through, but you don't go hoping around like that its too damn painful! Esp with her hip and all her other injuries. Other than that it was really a great story and so complex and well written. I really enjoyed it. Can't wait to read the rest!

Really would have preferred separate chapter postings. But I suffered through!

This story is so good, it's crazy! I found it about a year ago, but forgot to save it. So glad to have refound it. It's a fun story that's a little bit of a redux on OftM, but mostly different. There's so much here, but there could easily be an epilogue, or a sequel. If you like a fun, kinda intense Babe story, give this a try!

This was seriously good. Funny thinking of Steph as a blonde

A top-notch fiction here, Sue! You had all the elements that make a story great: excellent characters, gripping plot, exciting action, and heart-warming romance. Carlos and Steph were so instantly attracted to each other, so good to see. And all the Merry Men wanted to be so lucky, but loved and supported her all the way. Even the family members were believable. There were just so many plot points that were expertly woven together and nothing left hanging...all completely resolved...so satisfying! Can't wait to read the next tale! Thanks for your VERY HARD work in building this perfect story! -Kathy

Wow, that was a wonderful story. Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful talent with us. Now on to the sequel, I can't wait.

I forgot how much I love your stories! Thank you for everything you put into them!

nicely done :)

If you read stories based on # of reviews, this one might slip by you. Don't let it! The author finished the whole story and posted the entire thing so that 36 chapters seems like 1. Which means readers can only review once. Be sure to read From the Beginning. You'll be glad you did!

I just read this for the fourth or fifth time, I think. However, evidently I never reviewed, so I decided to remedy that this time. I really like your portrayal of Stephanie. I love how you kept much of her background the same, but increased her depth by adding her musical and singing talent. I remember the first time I read this I was shocked when I realized you'd made Steph a blonde. I almost stopped reading, but luckily I got over it and kept going. I would have missed one heck of a great story if I hadn't finished it. I love how you wrote Ranger and how quickly he falls for Stephanie. And the Merry Men, what can I say? You've written them so perfectly; I love how supportive and protective they are of Stephanie. I especially like how you've portrayed Lester and Tank. I also really like Raoul's character and his and Ranger's relationship. And I like how you've written Joe and how he and Ranger and the Merry Men are all able to work together when necessary in order to save Stephanie.

I also commend you on your evil villains and how perfectly you injected them into Stephanie's past and brought them into the present. Steph goes through some horrific ordeals in this story, but honestly, I think there's more angst in the sequel, which I'm about to read again, also for about the fourth or fifth time. Thank you for sharing your superb writing talent with us and creating such a wonderful story.

This is a great story, it really is too bad though that it was uploaded as a one chapter story. You have reduced the number of times each person can review this story to just once each. I have questions, comments and reviews that I would have left for each of the 35 chapters in this story. Looking forward to continuing reading this story line.