this is beautiful.
nicely written!

Well crap. Now I actually want to read more stories with a ChaosCloud pairing. That's got to be RARE.

Sweet story, I really enjoyed it. Wish there were more though...

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Aww, your Chaos is one big softie xD

*bemused* This is cute and creepy, all at once.
It was sweet of Chaos to build Cloud his very own coffin -it's not like he knows better- and the work lovingly put into it... It's an adorable courting gift, I can't help but imagine Cloud's reaction upon waking. *wryly* I just don't see him appreciating it - not at first, at least.

But it's morbidly ironic... The Hero having served his purpose, except for the one that all mortals are tasked with. - A COFFIN. While I heartily believe that it is very comfortable, it's the symbolism that creeps me out. It even has images from the Lifestream...

*amused* You know... I get the feeling that this story set's the tone -sweet and slightly creepy- for their entire relationship. Brilliant.

Love this one. Chaos and Cloud unusual but a good pairing.

Oh my Goddess, that is so sweet. -sigh- You made me feel something I don't often feel, Content. I like how Cloud regain conciousness for a moment, just long enough to confirm it was Chaos. Very nice description of the coffin too! I think I'm going to attenpt to create a small version of it, seeing as I'm a woodworker and all. I may even be able to get some of the scene on the sides on it if I ask my friend who's an artist.

Can you write another Chaos/Cloud story because no one else will, seems your the only one with sence!

This is a really nice story. It's very tranquil.

Wow. Really, wow. That was amazing, even though I'm still slightly confuzzled.

A coffin? That's... unexpected, hilarious and... sweet! Auu, I want a personally made coffin... from Chaos XD

*giggle* Keep up the great work,

~Yumi

Awe! ヾ(｡ー｡)彡

That was surprisingly cute, definitely not what I was expecting when I saw the Chaos/Cloud tag, but a great fic non the less.

Thanks for the read,

Blooming Delirium

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Wow! I never thought that Chaos could be so lovingly sweet... :)

How sweet, a coffin prepared just for beloved Cloud - I bet most humans would not take it as a compliment.