i loved it!

I would liked to have seen more of youg Kiba, that's what I was looking for when I came to fanfiction for after all. I only just watched the end of the series and though it's beautiful I felt so upset because it was over. sigh. Anyway, I liked it. Indeed the change in tenses was a bit strange, it's kind of distracting once you notice...

p.s. after reading your biopage, I must tell you that compared to Frensh, English is not that complicated. But then again, you'll know better.

good luck with writing

muyany

This is pretty cute. It's nice to see a canon-friendly OC and missing moment sort of situation. It might be better if you could keep to one tense, but otherwise, it's very well written.