THIS WAS HILARIOUS.
I apologize for the overuse of capslock but omg I love this story. It's so rich and multi-faceted. There's angst, there's chemistry, there's humour, there's the villain looming in the background, and even the zanpakuto spirit interactions. It has everything a perfect Bleach fanfiction needs to have. And your writing packs an impact. I love your work 3

Omg this is the Byakuya x Hisana I never knew I wanted. I'll be honest. I wasn't one to ship Hisana with him but the way you write her, the chemistry is just PERFECT between them. Thank you so much for writing this _ I LOVE IT!

Loved the reunion :D

Oh I absolutely LOVED this chapter!

Ohmygod, she told him! XD

OuO I LOVE YOU

I have not read past chapter 24 when I a reviewing so this is a plain guest right from the start. I think Yoshiko was in love with Kojima and have to leave him for the same reason - the family wanted him to. To be truthful I was all ready for Yoshiko to be a total b*tch when this started but I'm sort of glad she's not - it gives more depth to not only her character but to the story as well. I have to wonder if you planned all of your story out though - mainly because I suck at doing such. I think I've only planned one story out and even that's not really planned out - I planned the characters and what happened in their life as well as the basic story line of the main character. Anything else is left up to my imagination.

OH. MY. FREAKING. GOSH.

I knew I was screwed the moment I read "reincarnation - Hisana - memories - Byakuya", and guess what, I really was! Though I admit I decided to skip the more citrus-related parts, I had a heck of a good time reading this, especially since you portrayed the characters very well. I love that your OC's were loveable and fit in the Bleach-verse well, and I especially love Kojima (though I wish he could've ended up with Yoshiko *sigh*)! But besides that, Hisana was just as I'd expected her to be: kindhearted, stubborn, and completely devoted to others, though (let's just say) she's a little overly so. But that fit my image of her exactly.

I also liked Byakuya. Come to think of it, he's an impossibly hard character to capture. But you did it PERFECTLY!

Elizabeth

Uh. Whoops.

Bya-Bya is an idiot. That's what happens when you are so stoic. When something does get through your defenses, you become as squishy as tofu. Unlike Rukia. She's built up an immunity to traumatising situations.

Konno-hime and Kojima are interesting! Their relationship, I mean. Very complicated, ain't it? Ayumi and Kyo are cute too~ Awwww. Out of all the OCs, Ayumi has gotta be my favourite. She's just adorable!

...why do I have a feeling Senbon-chan did that on purpose? She is cheeky enough to do so.

I can't help but laugh at how she keeps calling his kenseikan 'hair noodles'. Considering her personality, she probably called them that infront of him during their marriage. I can just imagine him trying to convince her otherwise xD

I like Senbonzakura-chan. She seems like one of those cheeky princesses.

Uh. Well. Atleast now she can't say she doesn't love him back. Um. Well this is one big mess.

Hahahahaha! Poor Hisana and Renji. What a big ol' misunderstanding to be stuck in!

Aaaaand kaboom! The cover is blown. But to what extend, I've yet to know!

Wow! Wouldn't expect Hi-chan to be so fiery. Hmm... Then again, maybe that's expected since her zanpakuto is of the fire element. This will be interesting!~