Hi include a new reviewer I love your story so much I read it every day it's bueatiful! I know this was listed in 2010 and it's 2017 almost but hey keep writing don't give up your stories are amazing...

J is a girl!

This is a good chapter and stuff, but this one thing that I caught is when you have the characters talk, you go like this...

Dawn : are you okay?

but in reality it is supposed to go like this. ("Paul are you okay?" Dawn asked)

(Sorry, needed an example to show you Dialouge:)

Other than that tiny thing, your story is awesome, and I love it so far:D

ooh was it celibi? It's so hard imagining Paul laugh if you've seen the series... GO IKARISHIPPING

If there are more chapters than why is the story complete? Oh well, i loved this story!

Good job! Its great and certainly...a total

ikarishippie~!:)

Nice man!

THNX,pokemon13~!

PS, I'm a GIRL! DO NOT expect me to be a BOY!

BYE!

CONTINUE ON TOO!

Bloody hell that was confusing. I loved it but it was very confusing!

to bad its over anyway update your other shipping stories like this soon! :) and great ending chapter!

Creative when thinking about Paul's past.

It seems like this guy has them in the palm of his hands. Nice battle description.

Go Dawn! Anyways this was a good chapter.

I hope more Ikarishipping moments are soon to come.

Paul is being such a jerk! Then again, he is in character, good job, he's HARD to keep in character.

Keys? I think that maybe Mundo should be Dawn's father in disguise or something if you ever need to add more drama.

Don't listen to him, Dawn! Anyways, good chapter, I'm going to keep on reviewing!