This tugged at heart. Obvious he cares for her, but needs to say more to her. He has heart under icy exterior. Both seem afraid to be hurt by overwhelming mysterious attraction.

Almost lyrical on places. Unusual use of metaphors and some irony in the love between two main characters..is conflict with a love triangle imminent? Handsome bachelor intrigues the reader.

Found story very touching. I think Inuyasha may love Kagome but fights it. Sometimes his words hurt her because she is too sensitive and wants acceptance. They are strong together but fighting this power.

YOU HAVE TO KEEP WRITING! I LOVE it it hasn't given too much away yet. most of the stories i've seen try to get all the pretense out in about 1 chapter. it's really GREAT to have a slower Starting story _

- Black Light

More signs? _ Cute so far. Of course it's sad... but that's always Kagome after a fight with Inuyasha it seems. still, done very well. Wouldn't mind reading more, if you ever get to it. Curious to see how the story goes.

Thanks!

Thanks for the reviewD I appreciate it a lotD Anyway, I hope you'll update soonD Unlike me who is lazy to type my ficsPhehe

hmm interesting..]

yay! I can't wait for the next chapter

I like the story so far.

wow that just prooves she has some sort of inner strength she has yet to discover totally

Wow, beautifully written. The way you described the rain was wonderful, and I like how you write Sesshomaru's thoughts.

Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! :)

I am definately enjoying your story. You are weaving it very well. Can't wait until the next chapter. I give you homemade fudge for Christmas. Merry Christmas.

liking it so far...update soon k

I never did like the way Inuyasha verbally abused her in the anime. Abuse, whether it be verbal or physical, is still abuse. Also I was disappointed that the writers never let her train to be stronger. I never wanted a superwoman but she should have been strong enough to defend herself without having to constantly yell for Inuyasha. I hope you have plans for her to become a stronger miko because this time some of what Inuyasha said was true. Dangerously, her mind was not even on the fight and it should not have taken three attempts to purify the bear demon. I know her life is busy, but she still has time to train. Sango could help her in defending herself. Miroku could help her in training her in spritual meditation to reach her inner powers. Whenever she's around Kaede, the old miko could be teaching her everything she knows. None of that was done in the anime. It was like the writers wanted to keep her weak and wimpy while running around in an exspensive school uniform that made her look whorish for that time period. Forget Inuyasha helping to train her. He would not have the patience and would not be able to keep his mouth shut. You've got me curious about this 'wind' thing. I just want her to get over her 'feel sorry for me' attitude and whip herself into shape.

I'm so glad her friends got her to laugh! She so needed it!

Omg Allison. (this is laura btw). that is fabulous. your so good at description, and its really interesting so far. please please update with your abundance of time. (lol because seriously, you have a lot of time). oh, and call me.