| Reviews for The Oriental Adventure |
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   Thallion chapter 9 . 12/12/2019 The combo for his fusion monster was wasted. He could have destroyed that monster with either of the fusion materials after using poly from the hand and reviving his monster with monster reborn. this would give him both the same monsters, the same lp of Bakura, and an added monster with a better effect. |
| A Reader chapter 18 . 12/24/2018 Well this began as a story that was interesting to read at first except that you keep mentioning parts that you did not right or some how was easy to skip over so I have no idea what is going on not only that you took harry’s Magic that I also do not like I don’t care that you are giving him supposedly a different magic that you say is more powerful that is just a cheat. If he couldn’t do it with his own magic then you should not have written this story. Well now I am going to go find a different story to read. Good luck with your future story’s. |
| A Reader chapter 7 . 12/24/2018 You responded to an earlier reviewer that all the wrong boy who lived strays you read Voldie does not know it was Harry I wish I knew what story’s you are reading because in mine he always knows even though he shouldn’t. Oh don’t get me wrong he would recognize the right boy be but until he saw him he wouldn’t knew which is which. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2016 Too many plot holes. Lost interest after reading the incorrect address. Godric's Hollow is not in London. Put some effort in you call yourself a fan. School boy error. |
| Esmereilda chapter 20 . 4/13/2016 phew at least harry is safe |
| Esmereilda chapter 18 . 3/29/2016 well you know they are going to get lily and mai back |
| Esmereilda chapter 16 . 3/28/2016 I didn't think it was possible but you made yami marik seem xtra twisted in this fic but I you save the potters here |
| Esmereilda chapter 15 . 3/20/2016 nope it is you yami marik that will consigned to the shadows not atem |
| Esmereilda chapter 14 . 3/18/2016 they will still be suspicious of him ra or no ra |
| Esmereilda chapter 13 . 3/16/2016 poor joey having to face ra and not even facing the real bad guy |
| Esmereilda chapter 10 . 3/12/2016 ok I wasn't expecting that |
| Esmereilda chapter 9 . 3/11/2016 but harry seems to be the favorite of lady luck and has a knack for oming out of sticky sitches on top |
| Esmereilda chapter 8 . 3/10/2016 modern magic shall soon come in contact with ancient Egyptian magic |
| Esmereilda chapter 7 . 3/9/2016 that's wone way to beat legilimancy XD |
| Esmereilda chapter 6 . 3/9/2016 lol its pretty funny the great leaders of the light sneaking around in a young boy's house XD |
