Wow. 2nd chapter and it felt like it was the 6th chapter. This is really greattt. It's also like a mixture of many au Naruto fics, it's my opinion and it felt like it. Cursed mark, pretending, becoming violent and etc. UwU I love thissss

I see this all the time and it bothers me because theres no literary point to it. if you're going to write the japanese pronunciations, and then just write the english translations next to it anyways, then just sont write the Japanese. theres no point. all it does is make it harder for readers to understand and add pointless extra words. if you're gonna write "gaman shiro" and then translate it to "just deal with it" right after, then what's the point of putting gaman shirt in the first place? I'll tell you there isn't a point because this is a story written in English

would have made more sense to pair naruto with Anko in this story rather than Sakura but otherwise it's a good story..

Amazing I can't wait for the next chapter

I hate sakura x Naruto pairings -_- and you know that She and Naruto would not endbup together if you read the Manga or watched the Anime. I am disappointed at that.

Uh, ew. Just fucking ew with all this shit.

"Taking the two scrolls from the fallen corpses and using whatever he had within to push forward, Naruto walked closer to that of his destination."

You should really change that paragragh. Naruto is still his canon self here thusly he wouldn't have killed them. He'd probably just knock them out somehow.

When Will the next one come out? xD

Plzzzzz-zzzzzzzzz update ..m y u no update its freakn a great fic

I love your story please update it real soon. Thanks

Please update

Wow awesome story I think you should continue this because it's amazingly unique

Why is naruto having a hard time fighting sasuke when he can easily overpower itachi?

Wow! Finally a fic that Kabuto didn't run away with tails btw his legs!

Omg PLZ update omg mg story is frikkin amazing!