aw well done

Wow! That was breath taking! It was amazing! The ending has given me loads of ideas for developing this...I'm not saying you have to (although it would be nice if you did), but if you do decide to take it a bit further, and your stuck for ideas...I've got quite a few!

Yours,

The-worlds-Naneth

Intriguing. The words flowed very well.

Abriel is very lucky. P

~Cal