Reviews for A Peasants Heart
StupidChinaBook chapter 1 . 12/25/2016
Tom Riddle Jr's mother was called Merope Riddle nee Gaunt.
bookworm51485 chapter 9 . 11/1/2016
Technically, author's note chapters are against site rules and can get your story removed, so technically, you can't just do whatever you want. If one of your readers got upset enough, especially at the response in this chapter, they could just report you and get your entire story, and any other story with similar notes, deleted from the site.

And I have to concur, it is really annoying when what you want to see is a chapter, but it's not one. And while it might not be so bad once, maybe twice in a pinch, you've done it far more often than you should. It falsely makes your story appear longer than it is. I set a search and limited it to stories with 30k words or more. With how may authors notes I've seen, and how many might still be coming, I'm questioning whether this story would have been included in the search otherwise.

Now don't get me wrong, I am enjoying the story for the most part, though there are some things that don't really make sense, like why they wouldn't just expose Bellatrix immediately while Harry was in the castle, free from her wrath. He is the technical lord and she falsified reports of his death. I think it would have made more sense him not revealing things if Remus and Sirius hadn't been involved... So yeah, it has issues, but it's overall entertaining. But the author's note chapters are too much.
Icestar2012 chapter 15 . 1/25/2016
so... damn... cute! 3
ComputerIdiot chapter 15 . 10/24/2015
Awww so cute!
ForeverAlone21 chapter 15 . 9/18/2015
I honestly love that ending... "the point is dear readers, is that they lived." I cri TT3TT
ForeverAlone21 chapter 13 . 9/18/2015
Ugh! In the chapters before this, i was really fucking angry at draco like jsbdjd djwnsjdkeke ne guuuh *sorry bout that, i just had to rage type because im so mad at him XD* poor harry though, he got raped and all and btw, i really love how you write. I mean, i admit there are grammatical errors and misspells, but the emotion is there (you managed to make me depressed, you know XD *hides in shame*) and i feel all the feelzzz and really, that is something most "writers" lack, the ability to express feelings and emotion through written works. Thank you for this masterpiece~ although i'm not done reading everything, i love it and i just had to review~ *throws sparkles and glitter in the air*
kitiku01 chapter 15 . 9/17/2015
Thank you for finishing the story, it was great!
michikuchi chapter 15 . 9/10/2015
Thank you for doing the ending.. Been waiting long.. Very lovely story, love it ;)
ThexGypsyxPrincessx chapter 15 . 9/10/2015
awwww i was waiting for the next chapter of this! i love it!
jayswing96 chapter 15 . 9/9/2015
Nice! (Don't forget to put the Completed tag in the settings of the story.)
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 12 . 8/12/2015
Thank you for letting Hermione redeem herself if only a little. But I would have liked to see a bit more of Ever After's kind sister in her character instead of the boy crazy girl. By the way, I love which story you chose to model this after, it's my favorite version of Cinderella!
Belletristik Aura chapter 14 . 6/14/2015
It's a good chapter, but it is amazing that neither Crabbe nor Goyle saw Harry go after the snake. Then again, they were imbeciles in the books. I can't wait for the final chapter and possible epilogue of this story.
Ritsuki Yonsago chapter 14 . 2/25/2015
How brave Harry! Thanks to Snape's potion that Harry wouldn't suffer too long and I am happy that Draco won (: oooh...I can't believe it's going to end :(
Hatake Tsughi chapter 14 . 2/20/2015
Great job and I loved bringing in Andromeda it was better than miraculously making it back to the kingdom. Can't wait for next chapter XD
sweetteatwo chapter 14 . 2/20/2015
I hope Harry will be okay and he gets well soon. Please update when you can.
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