Reviews for Unfathomable
Guest chapter 4 . 10/21/2018
Please write more
digigirl02 chapter 4 . 4/23/2009
Cute, I never read this couple before, but I liked it.
sweetypie15 chapter 4 . 4/11/2009
update update update this is awesome
rkfollower chapter 4 . 1/23/2009
this one of the stories that actually made me believe in Chelsi. Before, I only liked Ryelsi, Trelsi, adn Zelsi, but now, Chelsi is most definitely on my list.(Sorry jelsi!) Great job.
bsbneysdc chapter 4 . 1/8/2009
I had never read this one...omg...what a great read! Loved it! They could be quite the couple!

Until next time!
Awahili chapter 4 . 11/18/2008
Okay...breathe...take deep breaths...that's it...

Sorry, I'm calming myself down. You know - and I can't believe I'm going to say this, is anyone reading? - i liked it. *cringes* Chad and Kelsi really worked for this story and they were cute together. All in all, a wonderful piece. Now i must go douse myself in Ryelsi, excuse me.
Miss Kubelik chapter 4 . 11/18/2008
Okay, so I decided to read this after you told me about it and you know what? I loved it! It was so cute and I enjoyed reading it. I actually really adored Chad and kelsi as a couple. They sort of work in a weird way. If you ever write more Chelsi, or say a sequel to this I would definetly read it.
Malika chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
You made fall in love with this pairing It was great good job
Lilah Aine chapter 4 . 11/17/2008
Oh i wish it was not over yet, i loved it! it was great
suburbs chapter 4 . 11/17/2008
This stories deserves more than 6 reviews, so here I go... I enjoyed your characterization of Kelsi and Chad, and you did a great job of building the tension between them. The tone was light and playful, and I looked forward to each new chapter. It was a fun story. Well done.
Let Me Fall-Let Me Break chapter 4 . 11/17/2008
Aw i die from happiness... For real i love it i thought i was the only one who thought they might be cute together...thanks for writing this
Sonia9 chapter 4 . 11/17/2008
its really funny that chad and kelsikeep getting interupted when chad kept interupting troy and gabriella
Kuropie chapter 3 . 11/17/2008
That's really good I like it

update soon
SMARTALIENQT chapter 2 . 11/16/2008
I'm not sure whether to be bowled over by your absolutely fantastic writing or to shame you for not using your awesome writing on Ryelsi. Mean person.

But I like this. I really do. It's not Ryelsi, but you make a good argument for *not* doing Ryelsi (*small mutterings of frustration*), and Chad and Kelsi are so in character, especially Chad. *tries not to think about benches in Central Park* The, er, boob alarm thing was absolutely hilarious, and so Chad. I'm looking forward to reading more!

-SMARTALIENQT :)
Awahili chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
Okay, for some inexplicable reason, you've got me hooked. I had to literally force myself to click on this story (it being NOT Ryelsi and all) but I'm glad I did. The characterizations are spot on, and I actually do adore Chad. I just...can't see the Chelsi thing...too much common ground can be bad, but there has to be some or it's just as doomed. Still, I'm on the edge of my seat (and I still don't know why!).
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