Aw. That is so sweet. It had me awing the entire time.

Wow, you have some serious writing skill. I like the fluff, very sweet, and definately portrayed Richter nicely. If I may give you some constructive critisism, Aster seemed a little too.. Emil-esque? Perhaps you should take the time to mentally develop or expand on what you think Aster would be like as an entirely separate being. It's very difficult to create Aster as a character when you have what you know as Emil's mental image in your head! xD

Nice job, I applaud you.

I don't know if I am correct or not... but doesn't Aster (when he's still in his own body) have hazel/brownish eyes? I I had defeated the game once and restarted another one, and after I had fully understood that it was Aster in the beginning who saved Marta, I noticed his eyes were a completely different colour... maybe I am wrong? lol I think I am going crazy XD

Aw-inducing! I like it. It's short, simple, and to the point. I'd like to say that that kiss should have more set-up, but that's probably not actually necessary. Anyway, it's a cute story.

Aww...it's so short, but very sweet . Great job! Its good to see some Knight of Ratatosk fanfiction out here :)

Short, but sweet! D Loved it. RichterxAster is great, it's a shame there isn't much of it on here. I'm totally faving this. Keep up the good work!

Ah, short and sweet. The best fan fics are that way.

This makes me really want to write my own Aster. He could be turned into such an interesting character! I like you Aster. He's soft... almost.

Nice fic. :D

Gah that was so AMAZING! *throws confetti* Reading this makes me want to write one even more. xD This is so awesome, same with the other one. I think you're doing a good job of capturing both Richter and Aster's personalities. I know that we never actually get to see what Aster is really like but I think he really is along the lines of Emil. So good job! *another thumbs up*

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It was short, but still good. IT WAS CUTE! im planning on writing a RichtherXEmil fanfic since its true that much isnt known about Aster. But it was still a really cute story.

Haha It's nice to read fanfictions about the new TOS. Very cute story, though probably alittle too quick with the confession. I can't wait to see more, you are a great writer!

That is so adorable~

...I thought they say that Astel's personality is somewhat like Emil O_O

AstelxRichter? Wow, a new one!

Aww, that was so sweet w

That was really cute!