Three years late, but the line, 'I promised him shuriken for his fifth birthday' had me crying a little and then Hiashi promising them and the very last line. Oh... this was really lovely.

that was beautiful and heartbreaking

naash

Out of all the final words I imagined Hizashi would say, these were definitely not what I'd thought of. There was nothing too overtly dramatic about them; they were simple yet with a depth that astounded me. When Hiashi said "He'll have them" and Hizashi nodded, I thought they were finally accepted their fate and ugh I dont even know how to put in words, the way I interpreted that!

The ending lines were absolutely splendid. Great work! )

Awww, Fi. That's a really sweet story. It made me tear up a little. 3

...and IronyFateOTP continues to 'ship the Hyuuga clan. Two Steps From Hell's song "Heart of Courage" just came on. So appropriate. XD

What a waste of a fine life.

I love it! Made me cry though… Very appropriate for this community, I hope to see more from you!

Oh wow, that is touching...

A wonderful story!

Hiashi waited with him. This deserves more reviews.

Simple, yet effective.

I am grieving for Hizashi's life and Neji's happiness, again.

...(T.T)

Wow. Tragic, terrible, heartrending, and yet incrediably well written. You do an excellent job with these characters, portraying their emotion (or lack thereof), and the dynamics of their twin-bond. The last line was particularly poignant, and I must say that I loved the whole thing.

Favorited.

OHh i liked it alot, i love stories that give HIashi a good depth to them, there's like 4 maybe 5 of them, but still i like all of them. And i really liked this one. Can i use the birthday thing in my multi chapter fic (Terminal). ITs all about Hiashi and i need to do an awsome Hizashi/Hiashi moment in it. So if i get the go ahead i'll use a similar Birthday to Neji thing. But only if you allow it.