I loved this! Especially Megatron's thoughts on Starscream

Aww! Awesome! Almost made me consider specialising in take over magic. Almost... Great job on the great fic. :)

This was great! Awesome!

That was nice. Really, really nice. This is definitely going on my favorites list!

This is a priceless pearl among the too-few treasure-like stories I've read since I was introduced to the Transformer fandom.

THAT IS AWESOME! that wuz so beautiful i was sad there was no slah though ;j mabe they went to where they were to have FUN. ;)

'dedicated disloyalty', i think i love that term. in my mind, it suits starscream perfectly. dedicated in his disloyalty. heh.

beautiful story

I loved this fic! It was beautifully written. :D

I thought I had reviewed this wonderful story before... but I guess I haven't ;;

Well, better late than never! Your writing flows with Starscream-like grace, which is particularly impressive given the amount of scenes present in this fic. There is an underlying current of almost cute humor (which I would typically think would lessen the impact of this particular pairing, but here it does not). If anything, it adds to the teasing, wicked chemistry between Megatron and Starscream, which is simply top-notch!

Thanks for the great read!

Oh, that was simply beautiful. If you turn your head and let yourself forget for a moment that these two are working together to destroy Earth, the activity they're working on here seems so wholesome. Megatron learning to fly. What could be more innocent? And the set-up invites so much smug snark from Starscream that you dutifully delivered, but there were poignant moments mixed in there with Megatron's snarling observations, moments of wistfulness and envy and affection. These two truly do have the most complicated chemistry in the universe, and it baffles me, but I love it when I read it.

i actually liked this! Great job! i dont normally like slash but you wrote this wonderfully and the way you wrote it made Megatron and Starscream seem like a great pairing! :D

This is just gorgeous. One wants more at the end, after all those pain-applying sessions, but it is good as it is.

Should be under humor.

"It felt remarkably like falling. In fact, it-

When he regained consciousness..."

Killed me.

Aw, very sweet. The concept is clever and I really like how you played it out. Good job.

Aside from liking the way you explore how Megatron learns to fly in his new alt form, I couldn't help endlessly laughing at how smug Starscreen was and how irritated Megatron got. The line about the Unmaker was hysterical, as was Megatron's repeated nose-dives and the line about Starscream laughing himself sick. And beyond that, I liked watching them fly off at the end, just enjoying the sensation of flying. :)

You know, I'm surprised this wasn't under "humor" because I assumed it was humor-filled by reading the summary. ; Shows how out of it and tired I am; I didn't even notice! I should go to bed. Ah, well. Thanks for the laughs. It was a real stress-reliever. :D