awesome story! update please!

argg just update allready

this story sooo confusing, draws you in and you just have to find out were in the hell it's going
so please add the next chapter very soon

Hiruma smilling that is so scary and the best ever cliff hanger

AWSOMENESS COMPLETE AWSOMENESS this story rocks but why cant sena choose hiruma is it because he/she chose him last time anyway i think its unfair i love hiruma/sena pairings so i want to see more hiruma/sena action preety preet please with hot sexy yaoi on top? :) yaoi rules woo!

I really really liked the beginning! But as the story got longer, and the plot found some twists, and more twists, and random twists and awkward twists and started to lok like a pretzel with random dead ends in it, I started to get very very confused. The mystery is good, that what makes such an amazing story(that and Sena's hilarious reactions to just about everything) but with too much mystery, no clarity and random twists that come out of nowhere ALL the time, the story started to lose it's charm... but I guess if you are into that type of intrigue, this story would be really cool...

slightly confusing plot but awesome all the same! hope there's more to come! until next time! ja ne! ;}

Omg. Its not finished! Somewhere along the story I ended up too engrosed in it to have the care and time to check if it did or did not say it was complete, instead, I kept reading and reading and reading like a mad, mad and crazy, crazy crazy girl. Even when my mom had a near-death experience -no kidding, she was one-hour early from what'd have been her death by a lung infart thing-, I went to visit her while reading, and read while I was with her if I wasnt in her span of attentio. And its cuz, geez, how could I not? Your story is just as addictive as Twilight, but with less foolishness and more plotness. And whole lot more confusing, what will all the time shifts, and the chapters that werent real but we never knew till the protagonist kbew, but even then not all of them were the truer ones... Oh jesus. Superb. So freakingky intertwined, with so many stuff to figure out yet. And I love it. I love it all, i cant believe how enraptured I was -am, tbh, but I wanna kept my mental stabity /yet/. Your story's just so fucking amazing. And your characters! I'd have never know you could make out of Oka such a decent and interesting and deep character, for fuck's sake! Your amazing. I love it. I love it, I love it! Buut I curse you! Cuz I have no rest but to expect and hope for the time you release a new chapter! Oh the angst and the sorrow! Thank you, thanks and thanks all over, I'm more than hopeful for your next update, and please keep being such a badass writer - I mean that as a super super excelse writer. Plotwise and the like. Me loves you 3

Wow. It’s so great! So crazy! When I think I already know what’s going on then BOOM - 180 change. I love how you made Sena and others. I love this all mystery! But please do not make Hiruma to suffer (too much:P) I love that guy and in your story he is so sweet! Last dance with Sena was amazing idea!

Good luck! ;)

...Tell me you didn't just sweep my Eyeshield OTP off the table. TELL ME. D:

Also, I felt so bad for Hiruma in this chapter. SERIOUSLY MAN, LIKE, GIVE THE DUDE A BREAK, MAN. ;_; what a woobie, denied his Sena-love. PICK HIM ANYWAY, SENA. HE LOVES YOU AND STUFF. CONSIDER THE FACT THAT THE ALTERNATIVES ARE A SOCIOPATH WHO COULD BURN YOU TO A CRISP AND A GUY WHO MIGHT BE YOUR BROTHER. IT IS NOT TOO DIFFICULT A DECISION.

MOAR PLZ

Another chapter! Thank you! I was waiting to see what would happen next. And let me just say...I still a bit shaky about the plotline. I must lack the brain power or something! X) Still all mystery and intricate plotline makes the storyline makes the story interesting and fun! Thank you for continuing to write this story!

Alright, something doesn't make sense about your story. First, why does Sena call his parents by their first name? I mean they are his parents! You don't call your parents by their first name. You call them mom and dad, even when you grow up and become an adult, you still call them by their first name! So, I really think you should fix that.

Second, this chapter is in Sena's point of view right? If so, then why does Sena sometimes refer to himself as "he", when he speaks in sentences? If you could, I think you should really fix that too.

Third, the school Sena got excepted to. Why is it in America? I'm really confused here because you never provided a summary for the story, you just wrote and I quote, "See where it leads.". So, if you could, could you please explain some of these things to me? I'm pretty confused right now. Thanks.

Okay, so overall, I think that this first chapter was pretty good. You did an okay job, in my opinion. I just really hope that you can explain the things that I asked of you, to me. Thanks! :)

great story! it is a bit confusing, as i read from chapters 1 to here, but it is highly interesting. i am looking forward to the next chapter.

WUT? *Sena* was the one to mess up his memories? And after the last half of the current story was spent trying to get them back? ...Pitt was Suzuna? I honestly do not understand anymore. Nevertheless, I look forward to whatever the heck happens. :3

(***Extra question: Sena's a kissing maniac? ;P )

This is such an awesome story! At first, when I got to the vampire part I was like, "Oh no, not another Twilight!" But then the plot turned so convoluted and full of conspiracy theories that I'm...lost. I would absolutely love to know where you are going with this, if only I could figure out what just happened. So...will the next chapter make anything clearer? :3