Aw... that was so sad!

I like it. A lot. Sasuke is so evil. But very well written. Poor Sakura.

HOLY CROW what an awesome story u need to like totally update ttfn

aaw.. a sad beginning..

but i liked it ... n,n

hope u update soon

god y did u make sasuke such a dick

Tada! Review time. Pretty and sad, like I said before. You really are relishing in the...erm...freedom of expletives, aren't you? xD

There was still a moment where you switched into present tense here: "Look at what he just did. She never cries. She’s supposed to be strong." That could be stylistic, however. It makes it kind of pretty.