So sad, but so wonderfully written... Definitely, though, worth reading!

That's so SAD I think I might cry
At first when I read it I was like ok...
But now I reread it and I feel so cry-y :(

A cockblock
B too short
C this makes me wanna shoot myself so mutch u fagget

is this the first chapter?
are there more? i am so confused!

So. Freaking. Sad.

If it were not as late, I'd offer something of a longer review commending your wonderful style in this and other things I'd love to say, but as it is late, I'll just share that this little ficlet broke my heart is a beautiful way. I'm not crying or anything, but I feel something in my throat and something heavy in my chest as I think about it. It's so sad and bitter-sweet, but perhaps that's what I love about it.

This is sooo sweet! It's amazing how in this one-shot we learn so much! Great job :)
And I feel the same about the sanzu lines... One day I think using them will bite Kid in the butt without him even realizing it.

short, but absolutely dramatic and enticing!

i love how you didn't take the innocent route with kidma (which i was actually expecting!), but instead took a darker, more intense route.

who would imagine they would have such a relationship? both of them denying each other, and in turn, themselves.

well-written, i definitely enjoyed it :

That was so beautiful and heartbreaking! I loved it.

Lovely story! Excellent portrayal of Kid's emotions. I only wish it was a little more juicy...hee hee

Really beautifully written !

I liked it

Solace was beautifully written, done especially more so by your unique style and simplistic wording. It flows like a grim, yet light melody that tells of more beyond the written; you leave such room for more that it almost drives me insane [pun...slightly intended], and yet any more would destroy the curiosity that we find in this - perfectly so, that even Kid himself would love.

You blend the characters personalities so well, and yet you can tell the development put behind it, in Kid's forwardness, and the learned hardness in Maka's.

Their relationship together is so utterly fragile and tender, yet held in such balance, which makes me riveted in fascination. Kid and Maka are in a relationship I suspect neither of them actually understand, beyond the hardened resolutions that they are not in love with eachother; it is more so that they have developed deeper feelings that extend into their souls.

Beautiful, macabrely whimsical, this story is a true artist's work. You deserve a welldeserved round of applause.

OMJ OMJ OMJ THIS WAS AWESOME SO SWEET bt sad cuz u say soul dies BUT ITS SO AWESOME I LOVE MAKA*X*KIDD and MAKA*X*SOUL but i LOVE MAKA*X*KIDD XD write more P

aww

at the moment - MY ASS!

In my mind, they get engaged and married!

WOOT!

And have a son called SOUL (Yeah, that's right!)