Ew... sorry but I couldn’t keep reading after this chapter. I love your writing style and flow, and I’m usually very picky about that. I can get past the OOC- ness, but the fact that Mikan and Natsume are portrayed in having such a disgusting, toxic relationship is something I can’t ignore even though it’s just a fic. It’s gross seeing them physically fight each other and having Mikan even think about taking Natsume back after he cheated on her. Just... ew.

literally just a disgusting example of an abusive and toxic relationship. Honestly dont leave reviews often but the portrayal of Natsume and Mikan is just awful. That whole stereotypical mentality is just boring and making natsume some nympho with a sexist disgusting attitude is just awful. The writing itself isn;t bad at all. Mostly good grammar, and body style. but the plot is awful.

Awesome!

I love it already.

I'm hyperventilating, babe! I really am!

Babe, I love this! I've reread it so many times and I probably commented on a different account but hey, you no longer post stories so You no longer know how much you impact us. I love this honey. Favorite fanfiction of all times. I just see the realism to such a strong degree that I think its the perfect blend of visualization and narrative. Uggh my mind is blank, there are so many words I wanna say, so many feelings I wanna convey but it's just like a ball of fluff inside and I just wanna scream out in joy and you know, I just love this so much! I love reading how they fall in love again and I can't wait till his mum caught him and shit go south.
You know, I know the outcome, I know this story inside out but I'm compelled to reread it time and time again. I may not have reviewed under this account before but I just want you to know, I hope you can read this. I love this story, I'd love to see you return and bring a fresh perspective back into the fandom. Or you know, a one-shot. I just, wished I was a member of this fandom when you were active. You're remarkable.
Stay well,
Stay Blessed.
Be great.
X.O Air~

This was an amazing story but I can't help but feel that their relationship was a tab bit too toxic for the ending to feel natural

I surprisingly got hot under the collar by all of the tension. I'm super excited by this, especially since I finished the manga. It may be cliche but you got their personalities right which is what I like. Thanks for this chapter!

this is story is so good. i really like how you develop the character and the ending is very sweet. love it! thanks for creating this :)

heavy story

this is officially one of my favourite fics on this site

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This account I am using to leave a review had long since died a horrible death. But! I am reviving it, if only for a little while, to be able to give a proper review. I don't know if you are still an active writer (and I hope to everything holy and divine that you still are), but I'll be damned if I let this moment slip by without telling you how incredibly talented you are for writing something... something as "alive" as this fanfic. I loved every single chapter of it. Not many writers can do what you did, to make the characters "grow up" and endear themselves to your readers. I completely fell in love with your Mikan, your Natsume, your Sumire, Your Ruka and most especially with your Hotaru. I fell head over heels inlove with how you portrayed her, and your version of Hotaru has secured a special nook in my heart. She will be one, amongst others, whom I will forever remember and draw inspiration from.

I would like to say so much more, but I'll cut this here now (at the risk of sounding too much of a fan girl. haha). Lastly, I would just like to say thank you (so so much) for writing this. and for not succumbing to horrible grammar, and bad plotlines and half-assed story lines. Thank you. Coming across your work is certainly a breath of fresh air :D I thoroughly enjoyed this one, I read all 32 chapters in one sitting!

xoxo Chi

I love your story, there is depth to it and how you convey the message. You perfectly nailed it down. I like the plot, the setting, the characters, the intensity of the story as it unfolds, the emotions were real and how the love over rule everything. I like how you build up Natsume's character especially the times when he admits his jealous and he was man enough to fight for his love towards Mikan and confess his love, those emotions and character is so real. How you unfolds each chapter were excellent. This is one of the story that will leave impression to me..

There were few grammatical errors but can easily corrected other that everything was just impressive.

I enjoyed reading this so much! Love it