I found this story to be very easy to read, and highly enjoyable. I liked the little jokes between Liss and Christian that showed how much they love each other.

Christian is a very difficult character to capture, but I found that you did a fairly good job with him, particularly in that fatasl question ("If I turned Strigoi… would you kill me?")

I also liked how you explained the bit with the Strigoi caring for something from their former lives.

Well done :)

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that was awesome! your writing style is really good and you stuck to the characters amazingly. i was on stumbleupon and had vampire academy as my subject and it took me to this! im so glad it did! great job :D

i like it i think u should make more chapters

Aww...Adorable..So cute...So realistic..I totally loved that...

omg this is really good you should write more

xoxo

This was really good and I loved Christian here - though i hate Lissa - _ awesome one-shot : )

wow that was sweet

this was a really good chapter thingy! christian is absoloutley awesome! but so was dimitri before the whole stigoi thing. i wish there was a combo of the two...

sorry, im off subject now

I really really liked this!

Congratulations to the max! Supreme characterisation, I am most extremely impressed. That came across just right, that did. I can imagine it being EXACTLY what each of them were thining. A very touching and sweet moment. I applaud your excellent Litterary skills!

I love this..really it is very good... so like the real books.. Thank you :) i really hope they will be together again

Hey I just wanted to say that this is awesome!

In fact im convinced you are richelle mead in disguise.

Please continue writing about VA cause you have totally got it down.

Aw.

Aww! I've never had a one-shot make me cry before. That's heart tearing. Great writing.